Sentus- White & Blue

[classthe_king]

Thanks guys for the feed.

@Chambers I'm actually going to start doing that once the snow clears, I'll jog around the neighborhood.

[Robbie G]

Sellout

[classthe_king]

word

[Sekou]

"But I got the map in my hand; firm in my clutch
And this has never once been about earnin some bucks"

I really loved the rhyming and the flow on those two lines.
Was pretty well written, not your best work though, from what I've heard so far.
You seemed out of breath most of the time.

Overall, pretty solid job

[Tash8]

Who can say they have their heart attached to the booth
And vow to spit till they're out and hit the max of their youth
This is more than just music; it's the core of a movement
To revolutionize thought and restore all that's prudent
But life's a bitch, so I grab the whore and abuse it

my fav part, that was sick...besides that it was a cool song, u struggled a bit...maybe have more breaks in your lines or something?

I think it'da been funny if you did the hook too, oh well hahah...anyways working man

[Phantom]

your lyrics r better than id say 90% of what i see and hear anywhere. work on the flow and youll be golden dude. very impressed. people on here usually dont take a look at the music as much as they do the technicality of a track, when professional musicians dont even do that shit. people are turning this stuff into something its not and i feel this verse represented that notion and more of what i feel about this music shit. good work!

[classthe_king]

Thanks guys, means a lot

[SMKshady]

This was pretty good, don't know about the end you kept breathing like you where about to pass out or something lol, but in the middle it had a good flow I gave it a second listen and i'm gonna be downloading this, pretty good freestyle Sentus

Edit - The beat is banging too, love it.

[classthe_king]

Thanks man

[Steve Spag]

Oh God not this beat again, haha!
It's okay, I'll let it slide.

Damn you go in on this one. Lyrics are sick, straight-forward and dope. Rhyme-scheme is good, I like the multi's that you threw in there. Pretty good for a freeverse track, flow was pretty solid and the delivery was pretty smooth aswell. I also like the way it ends, last line is awesome!

Keep it up brotha!

[classthe_king]

Thanks Spag

[VenomBlackViper]

This divine spitter climbs quicker cause I rhyme sicker
Your heart's big but don't start shit cause mines bigger'

Your flow on that part was fucking godly, everything was just perfect
good verse, packed with multis
flow was off at some parts but it's nothing that fucks it up and you're obviously working on improving your flow which is good
you did the beat more justice then most of the other rappers i've heard over it even though it doesn't suit your style as much as dark beats do.
keep it up man

[gutawafang]

Woot woot. This is good shiz man. Totally loved the content. I like your voice. Like deep.

[classthe_king]

Thanks both of you