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Postby Spyder » Jan 24th, '11, 19:39

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was gonna have WordsMyth but then he retired :(

Forget the punches fuck-a-rocky, Muhammad-Ali
Im-a-nazi, come-and-watch-the comical kamikaze.
Games over I won-bitches you wait til the fun-finish
“you hooked on my lines” got a pen that hunts-fishes.
piranha pad, shit every rap is a battle-to-me
kick my verse on the track, sit back watch vocals battle-the-beat.
And this is just a freestyle, wait til FaQ-splatter
“Comin off the top” like this kids call me the mad-hatter.
Im like-Jesus, light skinned white-genius
Tongue strikes just wait til the mic-freezes.
I ‘slice-fetus’, and “cut you off from your head-start”
Lead-shards from pen-sparks hit you right where ya dreads-part.
Ive become a-mazin guns-blazin one mic, one-stage-and
Some-racist who say one, Caucasian cannot change-the,
Game but who they to say my days done, no sun-raisin?
I guess they, still pissed they pullin minimum wage-in.
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Re: quick 16

Postby Poison Ivy » Jan 25th, '11, 22:11

Nice flow, good freestyle wish I could drop like this. 10/10.
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Re: quick 16

Postby Spyder » Jan 26th, '11, 19:53

thanks bro

basically shakin off rust hopin to get back to like a use to write :'(
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Re: quick 16

Postby HipHopHead » Jan 27th, '11, 04:29

Spyder wrote:hopin to get back to like a use to write :'(

It's a long way to the bottom.
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Re: quick 16

Postby Spyder » Jan 28th, '11, 03:53

now now cole play nice
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