NEW STEVE SPAG - My Job (Must Hear)

[Steve Spag]

Link of feed; viewtopic.php?f=38&t=101588&start=30

Well, here's another new track for ya'. I recorded this the same day I recorded "Sticks & Stones", so any advice you gave for that track that applies to this, you know it was done before you said anything, however I'm satisfied with the song myself, soo here ya' go!

http://www.myspace.com/stevespag
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=9860353
http://www.zshare.net/audio/820408765f2ea2f6/
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zA28Yqj0QiY

Leave Some Feedback Please!


More New Music Next Week...

[classthe_king]

This was a huge step up from your other tracks I've heard. Loved the beat and your flow was great over it. You had pretty good rhymes too. I was impressed.

RF in a couple days? lol

[Solace]

You showed me this a while again but whateverr! It's still a great track, stays getting rotation on my iTunes. You are showing a lot of improvement now, keep it up. You have a great flow and content, your choice of instrumental/beat never disappoints actually.

[Xray]

This was a nice bro. Laid back, chill track. Lyrics, flow and delivery were all on point. Audio wise it's perfection, you could work on stepping up your lyrics though. Not that your lyrics aren't good, cause they are, but you could use the extra step to look more lethal in the Hip Hop world. A friend of mine showed me Necro's 'I need drugs' track, and I was like shit, is that Steve Spag? Haha you have his voice, your voice is more powerful though. Keep up the great work brother. You'd get much more recognition if you focus on lyricism more. Mostly your rhymes need this. I notice you rhyme basic stuff sometimes, try different rhyme schemes every now and then.

[Emadyville]

A personal type track that definitely came through in your lyrics and delivery, and just that alone made it dope. Flow on the third verse stood out in terms of flow on this track, the rhymes were pretty well executed. I like the switch on the hook as well, overall the hooks were pretty good, the only thing is I wish you woulda sounded a little different on the hook in terms of your delivery or voice, but like I said it was good man. Good track man, definitely stepping it up

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you are feeling this track!


Xray, you think I sound like Necro? LOL!
I dunno man, I'm not seeing it, he sounds like a young LL Cool J though...he really does have a pretty good voice, and that track is sick, lol.

Keep the feed coming!

[Steve Spag]

1st bump.

[Tranquil]

it took me forever to download this track because my internet is being a bitch but i download it, i have to say, ive only listened to a couple of your songs and this is by far the best out of the ones ive listened, i love the beat and you flow is great this is definitely going on my iPod

Can you feed my new track? viewtopic.php?f=38&t=101975 thanks bro

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks man, glad you like the track! Sorry it took soo long for it to load for ya'!

[Tash8]

be a bit more natural on the intro

anyways lyrically i liked it, nice rhyme schemes n shit. I enjoyed the hook- "well mine, is right here.." <-raw..i also like the second verse..the other two r cool..

good job man

[Kez]

Alright you guys are probably gonna wonder why i'm bumping lots of old Steve shit with my feed, it's cause he asked me to feed all these tracks over the last few months and i never got time, so i wanna share my thoughts. Ima leave this notice above every single one incase someone misses the message

I agree with Tash, the intro is kinda unnatural lol, and a bit pretentious

The beat's sick though
Reverend Lovejoy line was fuckin good, probably the best of the song imo
I thought the "reaching these teen youths" thing was also a bit pretentious to be honest but apart from that the lines were on point lol
The hook i love, along with the concept
Flow is more back to the standard of yours but i can hear the passion for it in it even so
Rhymes are pretty sick for the most part, the "wisdom from rough songs" multi was nice
I aint really got much to fault this about, it's just a good track haha