Is this a good punchline?

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 20:57

I'm going to use it in a cw piece but wasn't sure if anyone would get it.

- You should stray your hand from the mic, cause i can see through your words.

i'll gladly explain it to anyone.

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:08

Lello wrote:my english sucks so please do explain... :P

here's one punchline I came up with once, it's worthy:

call me an overpriced bid cause I inflate ur market

Stray your hand from the mic, cause I can see through your words.

Michael (Mike) Strahan is an American football player with a gap in his front teeth, so you could see through his words.

by **PhilTh3thriLL** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:13

I see what you're trying to do with that, but honestly man it doesnt make much sense. Don't try to be so complex with your raps, you'll just confuse the shit out of your listeners.

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:13

Lello wrote::laughing: I love it!!!

haha thanks, and could u explain yours a little, i know about markets and shit, but how would u inflate a rappers market haha

by **classthe_king** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:15

lolwut

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:24

classthe_king wrote:lolwut

did you see my explanation?

by **classthe_king** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:25

Cosh wrote:
classthe_king wrote:lolwut

did you see my explanation?

Yes...that was the biggest reach in the history of mankind. If you want to use the concept it has to be more thought out

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:25

Lello wrote:
Cosh wrote:
Lello wrote::laughing: I love it!!!

haha thanks, and could u explain yours a little, i know about markets and shit, but how would u inflate a rappers market haha

it's aimed at a girl not at a rapper... :P by market I mean pussy...

and a pussy can't be inflated or sth that's why it sucks lol :P

hahah i see

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:26

classthe_king wrote:
Cosh wrote:
classthe_king wrote:lolwut

did you see my explanation?

Yes...that was the biggest reach in the history of mankind. If you want to use the concept it has to be more thought out

it's not a stretch. Mic Strayhand= Mike Strahan he has a gap in his teeth so i can see through his words haha

by **classthe_king** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:28

Yeah but it was Stray your hands from the Mic

Not Mic Stray Hand lol

It doesn't even make sense the other way either. You will stray hands from the mic? Hands themselves can stray from the mic but you can't stray something. Like I said, it's not very thought out

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:33

classthe_king wrote:Yeah but it was Stray your hands from the Mic

Not Mic Stray Hand lol

It doesn't even make sense the other way either. You will stray hands from the mic? Hands themselves can stray from the mic but you can't stray something. Like I said, it's not very thought out

ok well i have another one i was thinking of, is this better?

I'm the Nordic god of war, leave you sore with a lisp.

by **classthe_king** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:36

I don't get it

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:38

classthe_king wrote:I don't get it

nordic god of war= Thor
sore with a lisp= Thor

by **classthe_king** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:39

The Norse god of war was Odin

Thor was the god of Thunder

by **WakeUpShow** » Feb 4th, '11, 21:40

classthe_king wrote:The Norse god of war was Odin

Thor was the god of Thunder

ahh shit
ok

The Norse god of thunder, strike until you're sore with a lisp.

how's that?

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