Young, Wild & Free

[WakeUpShow]

Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vBC3b_pxvKc

[Hook]
So what we get drunk
So what we smoke weed
We're just having fun
We don't care who sees
So what we go out
That's how it's supposed to be
Living Young and Wild and Free

Smoke a bit, blowin' it, throw a fit
write a verse, flow and shit, so legit...
Livin....Young, Wild & Free
Come...Smoke a while with me
Friday comes, it's tokin' day, so to say
We just circle up, float away, so insane
Chill music, good weed, great friends
Still moving, should leave, bakin
It's all good, no worries, relax
The night is young, noone knows where we at
In your prime, been high for 6 months
But that's cool, because you only live once

[Hook]
So what we get drunk
So what we smoke weed
We're just having fun
We don't care who sees
So what we go out
That's how it's supposed to be
Living Young and Wild and Free



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[WakeUpShow]

bump..

[ArsheyHaq]

That was some pretty good shadow-boxing (multis) I liked how sometimes you even rhymed the whole line! Impressive.. BUT the rhymes were kind of simplistic. Still, hope to see more from you.

[WakeUpShow]

That was some pretty good shadow-boxing (multis) I liked how sometimes you even rhymed the whole line! Impressive.. BUT the rhymes were kind of simplistic. Still, hope to see more from you.

thanks alot! was actually going for simple rhyme schemes so I could get a better flow.

[Xray]

The flow was awesome.

The rhymes were perfect for this kind of piece. Felt like a singing rap, if that makes sense. But yeah man very nice flow. Hook was dope as well.

I liked the last 2 lines as well, it was nicely done.

[WakeUpShow]

The flow was awesome.

The rhymes were perfect for this kind of piece. Felt like a singing rap, if that makes sense. But yeah man very nice flow. Hook was dope as well.

I liked the last 2 lines as well, it was nicely done.

thanks alot man, i was going for a sing songy feel. And I should have clarified, the hook isnt mine, it's Wiz's from the original

[WakeUpShow]

bump..

[-[Zach]-]

Really nice. I could imagine it being a verse in a laid-back toking song haha. Definitely captures the feeling a chill smoke session. Keep it up, man.