8 bars

by **Mahmoud48** » Mar 10th, '11, 18:28

i will admit i took the first line from an eminem song

im straight vicious throw plates and dishes
and ur wack disses there soft
im harder then the concrete pavement
this rap is my haven like Satan embodying music
so putridity that people believe it stupid conspiracy
and dismiss that what im saying and my ability
to jot rhymes in a structure that can tell a story
they bore me with all this fake Illuminati
dwelling on fake facts to make people believe this crap
its so embarrassing i feel like a tyrannosaurus
Rex in a room of vegetarians
zooming my way out of this place cuz im the best and they can
taste the wrath of an Arab strapped to a C4 ready to bust out the door
What! calling me a terrorist, thats dangerous cuz if i was id slit both of ur wrists
then bomb ur ass all the way to mount Everest
ever wished u appolgized well its to late this is where u die! THX for the blind date

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by **Sam.** » Mar 10th, '11, 18:29

8 bars = 16 lines :coffee:

by **Mahmoud48** » Mar 10th, '11, 18:30

MCSam wrote:8 bars = 16 lines

lmfao well idk thx for telling me
now criticize it :angry:

by **Sam.** » Mar 10th, '11, 18:32

only few lines rhymed lol :shakehead:

this rap is my haven like Satan embodying music
so putridity that people believe it stupid conspiracy
and dismiss that what im saying and my ability
to jot rhymes in a structure that can tell a story
they bore me with all this fake Illuminati

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