RKOunion wrote:His voice was decent enough but the rhyming wasn't good and the content was meh and you have a lame ass pun "lowered the bar like limbo" and the flow was choppy. Verse sucked.
xxTrigger1989xx wrote:RKOunion wrote:His voice was decent enough but the rhyming wasn't good and the content was meh and you have a lame ass pun "lowered the bar like limbo" and the flow was choppy. Verse sucked.
Some of the lines were questionable, yeah, but flat out sucked? Nope. Compared to his old stuff, yeah, but for 2011 hip hop, I think it was pretty good.
RKOunion wrote:xxTrigger1989xx wrote:RKOunion wrote:His voice was decent enough but the rhyming wasn't good and the content was meh and you have a lame ass pun "lowered the bar like limbo" and the flow was choppy. Verse sucked.
Some of the lines were questionable, yeah, but flat out sucked? Nope. Compared to his old stuff, yeah, but for 2011 hip hop, I think it was pretty good.
I saw in some of your other posts that you think this verse is a step in the right direction, I'm curious, how is it a step in the right direction? I just don't see it.
NicoleEM wrote:and lose the punchlines
Nollie wrote:NicoleEM wrote:and lose the punchlines
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