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Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 4th, '10, 07:11

Sentus was supposed to be featured, but backed out, that is why he is mentioned throughout our verses. Feedback: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=103376

Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b7yL5yUKoek

[1st verse- Amadeo]
It's a little bit of Amadeo mixed with Class and Cosh
Gonna knock you out worse than pills in a glass of scotch
Gonna have you blastin' off and send your ass aloft
And beat your ass worse than Copy did to Asher Roth
My wit is razor sharp, and I hate to break your heart
Y'all can do the Writing, but not the Creative part
Go search TRShady, and write "dope verse"
And this one will be the result that shows first
'Cause I just destroy rappers for some stress release
So to every rapper versing me... rest in peace
Shit, when I was a boy I molested priests
Plus I cut knives and arrest police
Fuck your weak rap, I wouldn't even read that
Let alone waste energy leavin' feedback
Shit, the only person that I'll feed is myself
That was dope, Amadeo, you don't need any help

[2nd verse- Cosh]
I'm rapping with classthe_king, yeah I'm a rookie, so what you're a pawn.
As soon as the track's over it's checkmate on this Michael Knight song.
What you're hearing is Sir Cosh, King Deo, and Lord Sentus.
We'll tell you where we're from, but won't tell you who sent us.
We're E.T., and we're I.L.L.
I'm G double o D and I spit well.
I'm the anchor on this track, I can finish it strong.
If you're the good news, like Ron Burgundy, you delivered it wrong.
I'll straight eat your head for leftovers, if you're trying to save face.
Punch you in your eyes with a pepper, cause I'm trying to save mase.
X marks the spot if you're trying to find cosh.
You're whole crew is a fricken swine flock.
It's about to get messy, get an art smock.
I'll never leave the top, I'm a chart rock.
Cruisin' down the ave. in an old Junker Ford.
Smoking, Losing Brain Cells, send us to the Mental Ward.
Strapped on the Spot, Don't Blink, I'll pick a sword.
A slimeball who keeps it clean, I deserve a Nick award.
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Re: Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby ShaBruv » Dec 4th, '10, 14:12

Man Amadeo killed that shit- lost the flow for about 2 lines in the middle but other than that wow
The molest priest and arrest police rhyme was so much like Eminem


Great multis from Cosh
But the first half of the verse was way better than the second
Mainly cuz the second half commencing the swine flock line felt as if you werernt talking about anything, like the lines were completely irrelavemt to each other

Keep it up

that just my 0.02 $

and wheres Class AT
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby BILI » Dec 4th, '10, 14:39

Cosh you had a nice verse there,but Amadeo was dope,I didnt know you can write like this man, :worship:
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Re: Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby Audi » Dec 4th, '10, 16:45

Damn Amadeo that's how collab verses should be written. You're closer was fucking immense. People need to learn the best verse goes at the end of the track.

You did alright CoSh. You still have room to mature as an artist. Just read Amadeo's and do that next time haha.
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Re: Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 5th, '10, 01:07

^ thanks for the feedback guys
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Re: Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 5th, '10, 04:16

ShaBruv wrote:Man Amadeo killed that shit- lost the flow for about 2 lines in the middle but other than that wow
The molest priest and arrest police rhyme was so much like Eminem


Great multis from Cosh
But the first half of the verse was way better than the second
Mainly cuz the second half commencing the swine flock line felt as if you werernt talking about anything, like the lines were completely irrelavemt to each other

Keep it up

that just my 0.02 $

and wheres Class AT

hey thanks man, appreciate it. And idk class said he would get me a verse, then he posted that verse, and said sorry cosh you wont be getting that verse. so i just posted what i had.
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Re: Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby VenomBlackViper » Mar 18th, '11, 04:59

Damn Amadeo killed that shit :worship:
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Re: Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby WakeUpShow » Mar 18th, '11, 11:57

oh god, can't we leave this in the past. my verse was horrible :facepalm
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Re: Michael Knight feat. Amadeo

Postby VenomBlackViper » Mar 18th, '11, 12:06

I never called your verse horrible, I'm just extremely impressed with Amadeos verse.
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