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The Best Verse Ever Written

Postby _Steven_ » Mar 23rd, '11, 21:51

You clicked it :wub:

Where I walk light bulbs always flicker and pop
So now I sit in the dark composing sickening art
I got a sinister heart in my rib cage bending the bars
And if it breaks out then something wicked's at large

I took the form of a hawk before I tore you apart
Then I summoned a rogue wave just to pour in the salt
Yeah I was born to exalt and bring your force to a halt
For convenience I hope the place we meet is forged out of chalk

Not an orator, a sorcerer at war with hip hop
Horrorcore entrepreneur put your corpse in a box
I'll set a fire, leave the hydrant to the orphanage blocked
And pop the tires of fire trucks headed toward the spot

Only minutes prior to my recording this drop
I put Deep Blue in check untied the Gordian Knot
I even kicked Author's ass to pull the sword from the rock
So you'll need kyrptonite bullets to avoid the onslaught

Yes I did title it that so you would read it.
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Put the earphones on and made the bitch Def Jam
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Re: The Best Verse Ever Written

Postby Maybe » Mar 23rd, '11, 23:24

Pretty amusing. The writing was top, flow was good and the rhyme scheme was a bit simple but it worked for this piece. 9/10
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Re: The Best Verse Ever Written

Postby _Steven_ » Mar 23rd, '11, 23:31

That's probably the area I'm weakest in. Thanks for peepin it bruh :b:
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Re: The Best Verse Ever Written

Postby classthe_king » Mar 23rd, '11, 23:40

That was great Steven, it looks like my help paid off :y:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: The Best Verse Ever Written

Postby _Steven_ » Mar 24th, '11, 20:50

Bitch please, next :b:
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