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Guta's verse against BILI. [FEED]

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Guta's verse against BILI. [FEED]

Postby Sam. » Mar 31st, '11, 12:20

Fund-raiser, how bout I donate one buck to you? I guess it'll mean you a lot too
Cuz "mac" on your sig is like a cover-up of being his puppy and sying it's not true
Grenade launcher to your face, I'm more insane than you, yeah "Bitch-I-Love-Insanity"
What a fucking irony, Bili so silly, dilly-dally, he's prolly more into philantrophy
Never provoke me, I'm your BasedGod, and this the day that Dalmatia Croatia "splits"
Like Japan, engulf in mighty waves, better prepare surfboards, cuz this is supernova shit
It's a phenomenon, not like you can fight this with 3D shotguns and sniper rifles
I said, I'm your God, you can't go against me, but all you can do is bite the bible
And you can duck or crouch or crawl to avoid my almighty bullet spraying gun
But you can't hide, Bili Ape, I designed the forest map, just start praying, son
But don't cry homie, this ain't a theatre, dammit, it's not even a "drama theme"
I'm gonna just kill you the meelee way, with crescent blades, make your mama scream
Fuck it, you know that the only way you can kill me is by being a scuba-diver
Oh wait, he can't afford the equipment, if he says he kills me, he's a ruthless liar
OH I'M SCARED, you ain't got shit on me, if you gonna fry me, be done in a minute
But look, take a look at how I just slaughtered you first, Bullshit-Irritating-Loser-Idiot

Line 1-2: Sig asking people to donate.
Line 3: Nameplay in red, spelling his name. And addons to the donate thing.
Line 5: He likes BasedGod and wordplay to his "location".
Line 7: He plays First Person Shooter Games
Line 8: Addons to line 5 about being his BasedGod
Line 10: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bili_Ape and I designed the map of his FPS game
Line 11-12: His sig is from the song Drama Theme by AOTP. It's a flip to his sig.
Line 13-14: I'm Fish. He can only kill me by swimming underwater or else he lies if he says he killed me with his verse.
Line 16: Nameplay.

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[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: Guta's verse against BILI. [FEED]

Postby Spyder » Apr 4th, '11, 05:10

guta first off man i wasnt feelin it to heavy

needs more multies it seems u used the - mark but when i saw it it didnt connect multies so idk the point of em.

needs to be more punches to him, nameplay personal punches ya know. u played to much on being god so i lost interest

but anyway man keep with battling and good luck in our battle
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Postby macdaddy019967 » Apr 4th, '11, 07:23

tight verse i thought it was dope :y:
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