HAHA there's some pretty funny lines in here...I just wish the lyrics and rhyming were better

it'd make it more enjoyable

but otherwise, your concepts are always really good, and I wish I'd come up with them myself!
Some lines that made me

:
"Even if a write a love song , people'll say that it's really terribly gay"
"Bitches scream when they see me but not in a good way"
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sorry, just being honest

oh, well..only way you'll continue to get better is keep posting and I'll always be here to provide feed and encourage

keep it up!