Vettori, Sincere & Nas- Rule

by **Vettori** » Apr 7th, '11, 23:19

http://hulkshare.com/2n1n2tlgatqs

We just recorded this..i wanted to use a non soundclick beat, and iv'e never done a remix before.
So we used an old nas song. i always had this melody stuck in my head. finally found out what the song was.

Youtube link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QzrtQwTgBUs

Link to feedback
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http://www.youtube.com/user/ScrubzMc · by **Scrubz** » Apr 7th, '11, 23:35

Not bad dude. I like this original song, nas is dope. You had the better verse for sure, much more fluent and structured. Your dubs were perfectly mixed along with ur main vocals. The other guys mixing was decent, I could tel a difference tho. All in all it was a nice little track, liked the feel to it. If u ever want original beats hit me up, I can hook u up with a couple free bee's. if u get a chance I'd like you to listen to my newest single off my ep, difficult to say. Thanks bro keep at it.

by **DOPE** » Apr 8th, '11, 02:49

You've got a dope flow, lyrics are good, the beat is nice, not really my type of a beat though.

I've heard better stuff from you, this one is pretty good too. You would sound better if you put more emotion in your vocals (not saying there isn't any, just saying a bit more of it would be good.

Over all, its a good song

by **Vettori** » Apr 8th, '11, 03:09

thank you

, im actually sick atm, well getting over a cold... but i tried haha

by **Fa-Q** » Apr 8th, '11, 03:29

Not bad man....your delivery is the only thing I would question. Its very generic...I think you need to find your niche and find some originality in your voice