Pyromaniacs- Fire Flame Remix

[classthe_king]

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=112998



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I made a thread asking for feed but you guys didn't really take advantage of it Anyway, I'll return feed on anyone that gives it.

[WakeUpShow]

Your delivery/flow/enunication is a 1000x better than your last drop. I might go as far as to call it excellent lol, you rode the beat very well.

[Satire]

Your delivery/flow/enunication is a 1000x better than your last drop. I might go as far as to call it excellent lol, you rode the beat very well.

^ See Jared? I told you. And like I said, it sounds 5x better without this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG9z0RD-alA

Anyways, my only complaints at this point (Besides the strange instrumental choice) is that some parts your enunciation was off and it was hard to understand. I also thought the part where you said "But ACKTUALLY" sounded kinda awkward for your voice. Other than that, you've improved so much since you've started it's not even funny to look back.

Cole, well, is Cole. His voice sounds so different from the first time I heard him omfg. But, he always drops a solid, smooth verse and I don't think there's a single fault in him other than his quality, which isn't even bad but it would sound amazing with great mixing, but then again, that could be said for alot of people.

[gutawafang]

Already liked your page man! Add me! hahahaha

Man, I think you're improving like mad man. It almost sounds like you've been rappping for a decade or something. Keep at it.

[B.A.D.]

lol... is that birdman and lil wayne??... Oh my

I cant listen to much to your vocals, theyre too low and the beat is too loud so I cant figure out much of what youre saying.. hmm, yeah like someone said above me, you are improving a ton, but there still things weird on the flow like some of the stops are too THERE, say. and kinda disconnects the flow, specially if youre tryng to rap fast, I dunno, seemed a little shaky. but I did liked the delivery, agressive.
try to fix your mixing.

whose that on verse 2, has a controlled flow, and nice ass lyrics. but I think he probably lacks originality, cuz the verse is a bit boring, at least until he starts to pick up, that part I liked a fucking lot, I actually replayed it... sounds pretti fucking nice... but needs, I dunno, better connection. something to make you go Wow.

pretti good stuff, apart from the beat and the volume of your verse, honestly this is quite good, lived up to the expectation. great job...

[mceddie]

wow


very nice man, amazing flowing, some of the best heard on this forum.

[Vettori]

this is actually the dopest Freestyle beat. haha was gonna do something on it for fun..
Definatly a dope first verse. the odd time your flow fell, very very minor.
you should have done the version without wayne/birdman and did your own chorus..for originality.
Verse 2..was dope,sounds young, but on point. You guys need more power in your vocals..maybe reverb. and some volume.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for all the feed guys, I'll take it into account when making my next song

[Scrubz]

Your delivery was great, liked your presence. Your flow was amazing in some spots and then in others it really fell off but it didn't take you long to get back. Beat is wack along with the hook(hate bird man). Lyrics were good as usual. I wish it didn't sound like you were holding your nose when you spit lol. The other guy was decent, solid flow(not nearly as technical as yours) but I did get a tad bored.

Not bad.

[classthe_king]

Thanks man

[Scrubz]

Thanks man

np, check out a single from my LP viewtopic.php?f=38&t=113221

Also robbie sent me a verse you did and i layed a verse to it but im not sure if you wanna finish it and release it. let me know.

[Tornado]

Surprised you went on this beat

Class, delivery was right amount of energy and aggression, keep that up, but the vocals were too low so it made it hard to get into the verse. Not sure you were totally comfortable on the beat, the flow was a bit-stop start generally. but alright verse.

Cole's only problem was whilst there was nothing wrong technically with the verse (apart from the levels, still a bit too low) he didn't stand out, nothing ear-catching. Alright to listen to, but needed his own style i feel

decent track but you both can do better

[classthe_king]

Thanks for the feed guys, the mixing problem was my bad, I thought it was good but I'll deffinitely get a second opinion of the vocals from now on.

I'll get to recording all the feed today

[Maybe]

Dude, any chance you can upload this somewhere else? Megaupload or Zshare or something?

[classthe_king]

^^^^http://www.supashare.net/bx1ln068egyt

Does that work?

@Killa, nah, not right now. I'm just puttin out tracks and trying to get comfortable. Thanks for the feed though.