It's a Cold World (Produced by DJ Corbet)

[Mr. Chambers]

http://hulkshare.com/nmjyiff00woe

he don't want the tracks...........he just doesn't

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lyrics since they matter so much to him...

why don't you stop then to realize i'm real//
why don't you stop....cuz you'll never get a deal//
why don't you stop....cuz noone is scared//
why don't i stop.....cuz your noone compared//


ok this time...i must of reached the bottom of the barrel//
the depths of my chambers.....problem in parrel//
why sooooooo angry.....it must be that jobless tension//
this is tom chambers....got that ego when he stomped on sentus//
honest question....don't appear too convince//
hows a loser get cocky when he barely can win//
and it really feels good...(you know)...waking up at noon//
daily routine at 28 and you stayin up your room//
constantly suicidal..plus hes fakin cuz the truth//
hurting with the proof....and hes playing like hes doom//
got this swagger...like you inherit what you rule//
nada...teenage dream yelling at your parents cuz its cool//
online bully showing off your merits like a fool//
being hammered and screwed over....clearly hes a tool//
hear say....and beer games only traits you try//
bi polared....bitch made....lonely place in life//
what a cruel world....what a cold world//
when was the last time you pulled any giiiiiirrrrrllllsss//
mad at the world.....and he swinging at society//
the first heist of no value...bringing out the irony//
after this...he'll sit there...thinking of replies to me//
like his girl lives overseas...sinking her flying weak//
mad cuz his groin burning from the herpes//
sooo muslim...dreams of blowing up while serving us our slurpees//

don't approach me...i'll service like you hurt me//
why i'm doing this?....cuz you certaintly ain't worthy//

uhhhhmmmm....
this must be the remains of fucking sticcy//
punches too weak and he ain't got enough to hit me//
give me a break....waiting for his record to blow//
but hit last project being a half decade ago//
i can say in all honestly...that your rhymin is raw//
yelling down "mother i promise that i'm findin a job//
next CD...i'm coppin...but your grindin is off//
but your average...even for your era....won't lie to ya dog//
i know you admire....cuz my flow comes as virtue//
back against the wall and there with noone to turn too//
going by tommy guns...as i'm picking off my enemies//
mr. Manhattan style...cuz i'm sick of those who envy me//
he'll get a long ending with abusing//
confused....and hes going through is own identity diffusion//
ruthless....see and you'll need some luck to calm me man//
on the rap scene...you the butt fuck of aussie land//

[Scrubz]

well i didnt expect this... Are you dissing him on sentus behalf? hope not. But it was done really well, im cool with both of you and dont wanna get in the middle but this was had hommie. The flow was smother than a babies ass and your rhymes were. Good personals and what not. Best diss track out this year bar none.

Now finish your verse for our track!

[Mr. Chambers]

thank you

[yoshi]

Not pickin sides, but shit was good.

[Slimm]

Like I said in Xrays thread, I'm surprised by how good you two actually are. Great track Mr. Chambers.

[mcZu]

Not bad, I'm cool with both of you fuckers, so, I aint picking sides, but these diss tracks (of both of y'all) are dope. I've to wait on the second round to actually give my thorough opinion on who's winning.

[Kez]

The intro was a bit long lol but still, it was alright

I pretty much echo what everyone else said

This though was pretty fuckin hard when it came in, again I aint picking sides. But the track alone, probably is seriously the favourite i've heard from you so far. Maybe it's cause you're angry in it, I dunno.

Obviously it was predictable to diss him about having no job, but these lines:

got this swagger...like you inherit what you rule//
nada...teenage dream yelling at your parents cuz its cool//

dreams of blowing up while serving us our slurpees//

FUCKING killed it

Your track at this point sounds more polished, but I know if/when Xray actually sits down and makes a full diss, that won't be an advantage.

But yeah shit, while Internet beef seems retarded the fact that it births stuff like this is awesome.

I aint pickin no sides on this shit, but fuckin dope shit

[Trimss]

it seems like Trshady got some dope mc's, this track is dope too.

"
got this swagger...like you inherit what you rule//
nada...teenage dream yelling at your parents cuz its cool// "

Fresh.

[Mr. Chambers]

there will be a round 2....just got work tomorrow i'll have it dropped by tomorrow night...

thanks to everyone who listened

[Steve Spag]

Honestly the intro was way too long therefore it turned me off and I closed it but I turned it back on 'cause I felt like it would be the right thing to do, and I was right. Pretty solid track, the flow is pretty live, the rhymes were pretty good and the delivery was on point.

[Block]

The joe budden-esque talking in the begining isn't doing it for me.

[ThomasAguanis]

The joe budden-esque talking in the begining isn't doing it for me.

I thought the exact same thing when I heard this. It sounded exactly like the beginning of Ransom Note. That had to be done purposely.

Anyway, with that being said, this was a pretty good diss. I'm no longer a fan of forum/internet beef, but this was done pretty well. Your flow seemed to be on point for mostly the entire song. Same goes for lyrics. I'll go check X-Ray's now.

[Mr. Chambers]

didn't really write or record lol

thanks for listening everyone

[Steve Spag]

didn't really record lol

Then how is there audio? lol
I take it you meant you didn't put much effort in?

[Mr. Chambers]

^i meant the 2nd round lol....guess this a free bump?