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BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

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BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby Spyder » May 26th, '11, 04:27

BILI
Time for this Legolas to "flee",just put it backwards
And you "will turn" to "Paris" after I pack words
Girl you should get a freakin pussy test, gyno
You look like a tranny wit women breast, gyno
You already got "outclassed", now I`m letting bullets
Pulling out your mullet, yeah you`re getting bullied
And I`m not your pal,or a prince,but call me principal
While schooling you at my territory I`m invincible
I`m winning and now its the time to withdraw,you see
You are a gyno, but the one that never saw pussy
Did something blow in front of your face,a live grenade?
Wheres your hair? Grow it back so aliens wont try to invade


Geno
I'm gracious, yet fearless like your homeland's national anthem
You might as well forfeit, like quadruplets havin' a tantrum,
You advanced by chance but I'll be pullin' out all the stops,
Lil B has two pretty bitches, but you're the one on his cock,
I see you talkin' a lot, but you're never backin' it up,
And when you rap it's like a jab without the stabbin' and blood,
Maybe you haven't practiced enough, but to Round 3 I'm for sure to go,
Rap so many circles around you, you'll fall down bleeding with Vertigo
Compete with no personals? You're about to get stuck in a rut,
You must be bluffin' you'll flush, even the judges made fun of your stuff
I've had enough of you bud, I'm upgrading to several pounds of coke
And you couldn't spit Raw if I shoved Hopsin's album down your throat

Line 1 - He's from Croatia. "homeland" "fearless" and "gracious" are used in the first 2 lines of their anthem. http://www.about-croatia.com/croatian-national-anthem/
Line 2 - Forfeit / four fit
Line 4 - Lil B has 2 songs called "Pretty Bitch" and "The Pretty Bitch is Back", and he's one of the few people on here who thinks he's actually good.
Line 8 - Vertigo is a disease where you get dizzy
Line 10 - In reference to his line from his battle with Menzo:

"Fuck your feelings I`ll take`em in the midnight and flush them"

And how the judges called it a bad battle

Line 11 - bud / coke are drugs
Line 12 - Hopsin's album is called Raw
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Re: BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby Spyder » May 26th, '11, 04:34

3 Punches - Geno easy(nice forfeit line)
3 Personals - Geno
2 Multies - Geno
1 Flow - Geno
1 Structure - BILI
1 Complex/Vocab - NA
1 Other - Geno

10-1 Geno

Geno murdered, but geno yours wasnt fantastic, nice multies but try to use more complex vocab. not necessarily "big" words, but uncommonly used words, also your first punch was good, really liked it, but try to make em more to the guy your battling and keep em hard throughout your drops :y:

BILI, you used gyno twice, and thats weak name play homie, the punches you made off it werent good and the multies that were there, not well. seen much better from you
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Re: BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby slimsoxshady » May 26th, '11, 05:00

Lil B punch :worship:
it's less subtle but i got a line vs No Way Out with that Hopsin reference :zipped:
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Re: BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby ThomasAguanis » May 26th, '11, 07:19

(3) Punchlines- Geno- I felt Geno's were better.
(3) Personals- Geno- Most of his harder hitting punches were based on personal-ish info, so this was an easy call.
(2) Multies- Geno- Had more/better multis than BILI.
(1) Flow- Geno- I felt it had more of a "battle" flow and was easier to get into.
(1) Structure- Tie- Both were pretty similar/didn't have many off points.
(1) Vocab/Complex- Geno- His had a more complex set up and his vocab was more unique.
(1) Other- "Advances To Round 3"- Geno

12-1 Geno

Geno- Great verse. This was far better than your verse in the first round. You stepped your game up big time. You improved in basically every category. You'll have to keep doing this if you hope to advance again. Judging by some of the other contestants, you'll have your work cut out for you next round. There's some heavy hitters in this tournament and you'll have to really bring your best if you hope to win (but you know this already right? why am I even saying this? It's pretty obvious.) I'll leave it at that. Congratulations on advancing. :y:

BILI- Your verse was alright, but it was pretty basic. I thought that most of it was pretty "corny" for lack of a better word. You basically just made fun of Geno's hair and tried to relate his name to a "gyno", which I thought was stretching a bit too much. Using it 3 times in a verse didn't really help either. Your verse in the last round was better by far. I think you took my advice to use personals and name play a bit too far. You'll eventually find the right balance though if you keep battling.I still think that you have a lot of potential, your verse in round 1 showed that. Maybe this was just the off verse that everyone has every now and then. Keep doing your thing and don't let an "L" discourage you, make it fuel improvement. :y:
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Re: BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby BILI » May 26th, '11, 08:47

Yeah I was aware that its a shit verse,thats why I didnt even bother to explain any lines,lol...I had to force myself into writing it and thats not a good thing,I already wrote a verse for Yah(much better one)and then you guys switched it up again,so I wrote this 10 minute verse just for the sake of having a battle and not dropping out.

Anyways that was nice verse Geno...good luck in next rounds :y:
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Re: BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby ThomasAguanis » May 26th, '11, 18:09

Just to put this out there, I had no say in the brackets. I would have left them the way they were. I also think the contestants should have been informed that the bracket would switch up in the initial sign up/rules thread.
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Re: BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby Spyder » May 26th, '11, 20:06

the brackets were meant to be done as always, i corrected the brackets to be done that way and said it in the thread
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Re: BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby Yah-hah » May 26th, '11, 20:27

Yo bili post it ill post my 12
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: BILI bs Geno( R2 B1)

Postby Spyder » May 27th, '11, 03:53

2-0 Geno KO
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