my first song

[Ticalrecords]

hey guys so i been writing raps for a while, and i just recorded my first song. I think its pretty decent but i'd hate to toot my own horn so lay that brutal critique on me. thanks for the feedback.


btw my name is AhdduB - that's pronounced "a doobie", yk like a joint.

here is my soundcloud my song is on it

http://soundcloud.com/ahddub

btw i reposted this in the right section

[B.A.D.]

well, this is not the right section so I will move it to the Audio stage for you
and, I'm gonna have to lock it until you read the rules and send me a PM with the feedback link

sorry man, thats the way it goes.