CHAMBERS, SENTUS & SAJJAD- The Darkest Outlook

[classthe_king]

Not coming out my ass...Tom Chambers, Sentus & SaJJad- The Darkest Outlook



Download: http://www.mediafire.com/?8066lv6c83rnajx

Tom Chambers: http://www.youtube.com/tomchambers5388

Sentus: http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic

(Chorus) (X2)
We the darkest mother fuckers in this town
If you gonna fuck with us we gonna run you down
We the illest of the kings
Lyrical warfare; we killin everything

(Tom Chambers)
I’d like to welcome you back into my dream
When this door closes that’s the window that I see
You keep on that bullshit, just gossipin grown folks
You hustling hard, you got a lot on your home loans
Right…I see you droppin your low hopes
Those jeans don’t fit; you have an awfully slow growth
You reach for majority, walkin that short road
I see cash for what it is, pocketing Euros
I turn that around into investments and savings
I’m overseas while you out guessing my placement
I’m restin; the lesson gets you restless and shaking
I’m testin session textin you the gestures you’re makin
I’m just cool with my words
I can school ya hold up, I’m too cool with the verse
Fool ya; a punk would be one to fold in a hearse
Christina Aguilera flow, I’m too bold to rehearse

(Chorus)

(Sentus)
When i hit the stage you know I gotta fire all
But fuck a clip. . . cause I spit . . . naga fireballs
The most vile claws rip through flesh
Rupturing your brain as all of your tissues left
Scattered around you; all the haters will deny
But I burn with the same blaze as Eta Carinae
When I’m ridin on beats, I strive in the heat
I form a lyrical calamity derived from the beast
I arrive on a fleet from a distant galaxy
And gain trust by showing instant alchemy
Take my final form as a vicious Valkyrie
And then have the human resistance out for me
You stand no chance when I conjure my tones
The worst monster to roam conquered the throne
Relax and just bear with us, rap is just scared of us
So let me entertain you like Maximus Meridius

(Chorus)

(SaJJad)
Men who've died twice must of bet wrong
Cause man I'll die twice and still roll four
And it's crystal clear that a pistol's fear
So I'm looking from the barrel when you disappear
I write quotes y'all can check the flows
They call me Wentworth Miller way I write these walls
I said everybody knows Heist writes twice as nice
Y'all like Chinese dope, cause I'm twice your price
Hell yes I couldn't settle for less cause I'm more short
You can see the fire in my eyes like Mordor
And it's only half-flight once my wings extend
If I went full-speed third realms would trend
All stress, no rest from these bad nights of sleep
So I smoke J's like a Nightmare on Elm street
You can spell-check it, this is no man's land
Which is why Ice rules everything and not Aslan

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[B.A.D.]

hey man, post the feed link you gave recently to avoid misunderstandings

[Kez]

Decent track.

Chambers your hook was good for the most part although in the very beginning it didn't sound like it would be. Didn't really start the track off with the bang it could have used.

Chambers your verse in terms of rhymes was pretty excellent. The multi was dope. Pocketing Euros line in particular was really good. Flow was great, that pause before the last 4 bars where you took a huge breath coulda been filled a bit better though haha. And I think you kinda mis-pronounced the start of the second-to-last line a bit too. But i'm just being picky so I have something more to write than "good verse", it was still good.

Class I was surprised at you, as much as I hate to admit it it wasn't bad. Infact you might have the best verse on this track. I thought it was a bit cliche to do a "___ like ___" line twice in the same verse but it was nontheless good. The last line in particular was possibly my favourite on the whole song. Your delivery sounds like the prick that you act like on here. Flow I can't fault, it was pretty much perfect, your verse was definately the most refined of all on the song.

Sajjad your verse great as always. Your flow sounded kinda like at times you were in danger of missing the beat though, like you were working to keep it on time. I see you doing that more abstract kind of shit like you did on your Chambers diss, the end of the song in particular came kinda out of left-field but it was a good way to end it. Delivery was good as it always is with you but I could clearly hear you starting to run out of breath at points Still kudos for keeping it going despite that. I can't fault any of you for lyrics, you all delivered, although I definately think Class and SaJJad fit this concept more than Chambers does in terms of their lyrics, with their references to perhaps more morbid shit (like the whole Mordor shit, Elm Street, the Gladiator references etc.), whereas Chambers mostly talks about getting money and shit. Don't get me wrong I still liked his verse i'm just sayin. As I said, i'm just being picky so I have something more to write than "good verse", it was still good.

But yeah, I can't say I didn't like the track.

[classthe_king]

Shit. My bad Ax I forgot, one sec

[Mr. Chambers]

Decent track.

Chambers your hook was good for the most part although in the very beginning it didn't sound like it would be. Didn't really start the track off with the bang it could have used.

Chambers your verse in terms of rhymes was pretty excellent. The multi was dope. Pocketing Euros line in particular was really good. Flow was great, that pause before the last 4 bars where you took a huge breath coulda been filled a bit better though haha. And I think you kinda mis-pronounced the start of the second-to-last line a bit too. But i'm just being picky so I have something more to write than "good verse", it was still good.

Class I was surprised at you, as much as I hate to admit it it wasn't bad. Infact you might have the best verse on this track. I thought it was a bit cliche to do a "___ like ___" line twice in the same verse but it was nontheless good. The last line in particular was possibly my favourite on the whole song. Your delivery sounds like the prick that you act like on here. Flow I can't fault, it was pretty much perfect, your verse was definately the most refined of all on the song.

Sajjad your verse great as always. Your flow sounded kinda like at times you were in danger of missing the beat though, like you were working to keep it on time. I see you doing that more abstract kind of shit like you did on your Chambers diss, the end of the song in particular came kinda out of left-field but it was a good way to end it. Delivery was good as it always is with you but I could clearly hear you starting to run out of breath at points Still kudos for keeping it going despite that. I can't fault any of you for lyrics, you all delivered, although I definately think Class and SaJJad fit this concept more than Chambers does in terms of their lyrics, with their references to perhaps more morbid shit (like the whole Mordor shit, Elm Street, the Gladiator references etc.), whereas Chambers mostly talks about getting money and shit. Don't get me wrong I still liked his verse i'm just sayin. As I said, i'm just being picky so I have something more to write than "good verse", it was still good.

But yeah, I can't say I didn't like the track.

in my defense, it was my collab originally so technically they're off topic.

just fucking. like i said i hope to collab with both of them again in the future.

[Kez]

unlike Kez (lol)

That supposed to be some kind of jab?

[Kez]

unlike Kez (lol)

That supposed to be some kind of jab?

No...unless you want it to be? lol I just threw the "(lol)" in there just to confirm I wasn't trying to say MY opinion was superior to yours

Just seemed a bit strange haha. Nah it's cool, it would be rather out of left field for you to randomly throw a diss at me.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for the "unbiased" feed

[VenomBlackViper]

So i'm really gonna attempt giving some serious, well thought out feedback here.

Dope song.

[Scrubz]

I like the the layering of the hook, but the lyrics are corny tbh.

Chambers, besides the slurring it was a sick verse. The flow at the beging was iffy but you picked it right up. Delivery was really nice, like the lazy feel to it.
"You keep on that bullshit, just gossipin grown folks
You hustling hard, you got a lot on your home loans "
Loved that shit.

Sentus, I think you could came with a little less intesity, i know thats your thing but I thought a relaxed delivery would have done the trick. "But I burn with the same blaze as Eta Carinae " That line hit soooo nice! but then this one came in: " And gain trust by showing instant alchemy,Take my final form as a vicious Valkyrie" and i was like mehh. Nothing wrong with the content but i think syllable wise it kinda messed up the flow. I think maybe this verse was a bit TOO structured. You eneded it right though, last 4 bars were had.

Sajjad, You delivery is cool but you annunciation is big pun esk but not in a good way lol. kinda sounds liek you got marbles in ya mouth.EDIT: it got better as the verse went on. Flow was ridiculous though.
"And it's crystal clear that a pistol's fear
So I'm looking from the barrel when you disappear
I write quotes y'all can check the flows
They call me Wentworth Miller way I write these walls
I said everybody knows Heist writes twice as nice
Y'all like Chinese dope, cause I'm twice your price"

My favorite part of the song.


All in all it was dope song, each one of you had minor hiccups, but that didnt ruin the integrity of the song. No disrespect on the things i pointed out, Im just not a fan of feed back like the one above me . Yall dope, shouldnt have beef just keep makin sick tracks. Always down for a cyph, HIT ME UP!

[Instant Legend]

this beats great, but the lyrics are what really stand out to me

whole joint just has a natural but...honest *if that makes sense) vibe to it

dig the clear enunciation as well

dope shit

hollar back folks, some newer shit!

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[classthe_king]

Thanks for the indepth feed scrubz, you too as well

[classthe_king]

Bump for epic track between the three best tr rappers