Dead Ed - Shadows (Prod. Atomic beats)

[mceddie]

uhh yeah, i found the beat on shadowville, and decided i'd give it a try cause i was really feelin it.
i think im gettin better little by little lol. i hope so anyway. what you think?


http://hulkshare.com/h373271edzg1


LYRICS:
Got a long way to go
Down this road
Been there before
But couldn't get my self up off the floor
Until you showed up and shined new a light in my life
From the moment that I saw u I knew this was right
How do I say these things with out soundin cliche
The only thing that matter is the message I convey
I need you, you are my breath
With out you my soul is dead
But the more you get to know me, the more I dread
You won't wanna be with me
My insecurities
Get a hold of me
Or maybe its my immaturity
What ever it is, I fear it with open eyes
Cause I'm certain it'll happen
I'm certain you'll despise
The every fiber of my being
Every thing about me, seeing
That u get to know the real me and
Wanna run for shelter
Wouldn't be the first time
God I hope I'm wrong this time

LOF:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=114870&p=1651451#p1651451


edit: i just realized this, but im pretty sure mart85, the producer of this beat, is a user on this forum lol.

[Block]

My advice? Throw your relapse cd away. Burn it. Smash it.. Something.

[mceddie]

My advice? Throw your relapse cd away. Burn it. Smash it.. Something.

my relapse cd? what lol? Could you give some actual insight instead of making a vague statement just to confuse me.
If you don't like it, cool. but don't give me "advice" that doesn't make any fucking sense.

[Block]

It does make sense. Anyone with an ear can tell that you are attempting to sound/flow like eminem on relapse.

Trust me, that's not how you want to sound.

[mceddie]

It does make sense. Anyone with an ear can tell that you are attempting to sound/flow like eminem on relapse.

Trust me, that's not how you want to sound.

believe me, that wasn't my intentions at all. i havent even listened to relapse in a year lol. that's just how i flow.

[Cookzee]

i found this had real meaning to it and it was really dope! i was able to get into it and understand it, i think your mix could be warmer though but it's good still keep working at it man and im sure you'll get even better... sick verse!

[mceddie]

i found this had real meaning to it and it was really dope! i was able to get into it and understand it, i think your mix could be warmer though but it's good still keep working at it man and im sure you'll get even better... sick verse!

thanks man, i appreciate that!

[B.A.D.]

A.a.a.a.a Atomic Beats!!!... God I hate tags.

is this the beat with DaViglio on the hook??... man its been used by half the forum already lmao.

I like the flow. lmao I think what block meant was is that you sound kinda with a funny accent like eminem did on relapse lol... sound very childii .(not childish... more like Child-ish.. u know??)

anyways.. I like how you could actually get that to flow this well. seems like you actually wrote it to each specifical bar on the beat. thats good... You should use multis differently tho'.. make em emphasize more and make them put structure in the whole writing.

and fix the mixing man, the quality is all over the place.

Good job non-the less, keep at it

[mceddie]

A.a.a.a.a Atomic Beats!!!... God I hate tags.

is this the beat with DaViglio on the hook??... man its been used by half the forum already lmao.

I like the flow. lmao I think what block meant was is that you sound kinda with a funny accent like eminem did on relapse lol... sound very childii .(not childish... more like Child-ish.. u know??)

anyways.. I like how you could actually get that to flow this well. seems like you actually wrote it to each specifical bar on the beat. thats good... You should use multis differently tho'.. make em emphasize more and make them put structure in the whole writing.

and fix the mixing man, the quality is all over the place.

Good job non-the less, keep at it

I definitely didn't use an accent lol that's my voice.
Yes, I know I'm 20 years old and i still look and sound 16
Also, i figured most of the forum would have used it, but its a good beat :P
Thanks for the feed man, really appreciate it!