vbv vs wreck(b2 r3)

[Spyder]

VenomBlackViper
Me & this tourney got something in common, we're both going ahead (w)recklessly
How the fuck you gonna beat me when you can't even beat epilepsy
Turns out me & epilepsy got something in common too
We both got you shaking & you ain't even rockin' boots, so it's in your socks & shoes
This bitch is too scared to even drive, afraid he'll get in a car wreck
Him winning, like a dog chasing a bone cross country, so far fetched
Now you're probably into bondage, being literal when you says your hands are tied
After this battle you'll be crying more than when your grandma died
Yah Hah was lost at sea, but you'll be shipwrecked so expect a hull
You're a fucking fruit, but soon epilepsy ll turn you to a vegetable
And why you rapping all that thug shit in your verses & songs
When you're a "nice good guy" saying girls going for jerks is wrong
You said hell is scary & not fun, then you shouldn't have battled the devil reaper
I'm known to get different strokes of genius, you just have several seizures
Feeling like a clumsy surgeon, I just killed this hospital patient
Result of a coding (Codeine) accident, he's lost in the matrix

To understand all the personals I used read this entire thread: viewtopic.php?f=29&t=109901

1. i'm going ahead recklessly, this tourney is going ahead without wreck
4. seizures cause you to shake, I cause him to shake in fear, shaking in your boots is a common expression
5. play on his name Wreck
9. reference to a punchline in my battle vs Yah Hah about being lost at sea
10. fruit = faggot, vegetable = person in a deep coma
14. in a verse of mine I said I get different strokes of genius
16. Codeine is cough syrup that you can OD on, if you fuck up coding on a computer it can be lost in the matrix.

Wreck
Meet and prepare for me and my alter ego; the "Two Headed Dragon"
You're hopeless write (right), I'm-flowing-nice, he's-choking-like a Dragon.
You're lyricism is in "No Man's land", not here, not present like a ghetto Christmas
I'm Moses, he's no "Jethro," give me the W in the battle, let's go, i'm colder then eskimos, bitches.
He "bites" style from MCs like animal "venom", I'm sending him home, based on momentum.
I'm sicker then "swine," I'm Kobe, he's Derek Fisher with lines, so
I'm about to "Bash" this "Bro," McGwire, Canseco, Bash= his first name, youtube say so
"Go eat a dick fag," this bitch mad, cause I'm rad, and he's ass, like as soft as J. Lo's
He's "evil, devilish," choke on my left nut like your backup-Youtube-link
He's getting "smacked up" like Prodigy, I'm about to clap-up-some-jewish prick
My "punches" go over bodies like a missed-hit, don't throw a bitch-fit, you limp-dick.
Wreck's "satires= "criminal", he's fucked like a flat-tire, his chances of winning; an inch-thick.
You beat "Yah hah" but your verse was a joke, you have a thirst to choke, I got a virgin-flow.
aka I can't be "fucked" with, shit I'm crazy like a drunk-bitch, like SSLP, get in the trunk-quick.
You got lucky not facing Geno, like a Philly cheese steak owner's worst-customer.
My verse= got you all in check" <-- "(Bust)in ya," the battle's over, winning is what I'm accostumed ta.


Line 1- viewtopic.php?f=24&t=115294&p=1648546&hilit=Venom#p1648546
Line 2- Wordplay, and also referring to him posting in creative writing a lot. and a punch about how dragons can choke on their own fire.
Line 3- His location here --> memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=39421
Line 4- Jethro is the father in law of Moses.
Line 5- Wordplay on his username.
Line 7- His real name is Bash, and a meta on baseball's bash brothers- mark mcgwire and jose canseco in the '80s. http://www.youtube.com/nuurahk83
Line 8- Dissing his made up website on his Youtube profile. http://www.youtube.com/user/VenomBlackViper#p/f
Line 9- viewtopic.php?f=24&t=115294&p=1648546&hilit=Venom#p1648546His & his back up Youtube page/profile. http://www.youtube.com/nuurahk83
Line 10- http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Smack_My_Bitch_Up. He's jewish as well I believe.
Line 11- His sig- memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=39421
Line 12- His sig again- memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=39421
Line 13- Wordplay on his battle vs. Yah Hah. joke as in the "hah" part of YH's username.
Line 14- a "virgin flow"= "can't be fucked with" punchline. & the Slim Shady LP cover.
Line 15- viewtopic.php?f=26&t=114404&p=1639055&hilit=Venom#p1639055 & a punch/a wordplay line about the Philly cheesesteak owner Geno.
Line 16- wordplay. "Busta" as in Busta Rhyme

[Spyder]

first of all Wreck finally got a battle
and now business

3 punches - VBV
3 personals - VBV
2 multies - Wreck(due to inners and such)
1 flow - VBV
1 structure - Tie
1 complex/vocab - NA
1 Other - VBV (clever punches in there)

8-2 VBV

seems one sides only cause vbv got the two big categories, vbv you had some clever punches, like the different strokes/ seizure line. nice personals with the grandma and seizure stuff. that was a good verse but gotta step it up for Sox lol. Wreck, wasnt bad man he beat you out in punches a little and personals alot, the ghetto xmas line was nice but nothing else made me smile ya know. you had some nice inners but the ending either didnt rhyme nice or didnt have multies which through off the flow.
in all decent battle but i had vbv

[VenomBlackViper]

I vote Geno

[Wreck]

Truee

[Wreck]

to me shit like health, etc. should be off limits in a battle, but you had a nice verse regardless.

[VenomBlackViper]

to me shit like health, etc. should be off limits in a battle, but you had a nice verse regardless.

I ain't tryna battle i'm tryna fuck up your personal life - Diabolic

[Yah-hah]

I just read both battles I just wanna say I wasnt super impressed. Last round was best round imo because these verses from all 4 battlers seemed like they were trying too had and it gets to be too much. Of course im more of a simple get to the point kind of battler like there not much of a flow. My advice woild be to use less words in your lines so they dont get boring trying to stuff too much in. but hey guys good luck and good verses

[Wreck]

1-1-0

Me and Venom tied for the lead.

But seriously, I lol'd @ the vegetable line. I didn't know you actually had epilepsy though.

Umm yeah.

[Wreck]

to me shit like health, etc. should be off limits in a battle, but you had a nice verse regardless.

I ain't tryna battle i'm tryna fuck up your personal life - Diabolic

I lost all the respect I had for this cunt

[ThomasAguanis]

(3) Punchlines- VBR- Wreck's were more complex, but VBR's hit harder.
(3) Personals- VBR- Though I feel he took the epilepsy thing a bit too far/over did it a bit.
(2) Multies- Wreck
(1) Flow- VBR- Easier to flow, but both had lines that seemed a bit lengthy.
(1) Structure-Tie- This category needs to get the fuck outta here.
(1) Vocab/Complex- Wreck- He had a lot of references that could be seen as being more complex.
(1) Other- "Explaining Every Line"- Wreck - This isn't always necessary to do,and I don't usually like it, but since Wreck took the time to do so, he gets the point.

8-5 VBR

-No comment- (though that technically is a comment).

& Wreck, it's better if you don't use "=" in bars. It just fucks with the flow. Use a word like "is" or "equals" instead. Maybe it's just me though.

[Spyder]

well idk who vbr is but he got a vite hhahah

but 2-0 vbv

final is sox vs vbv