Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

[Artille]

Here is a new 'banger' style track I created over a nice K Beatz produced beat, called "King". I wasn't necessarily going for great lyrics on this one. The mixing, mastering, and all other editing was done by myself. Please check out the track below and leave some constructive feedback, thanks.

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[WinstonMARX]

Ehh it was decent for an experiment but I know you have the potential to make some seriously powerful stuff. The only thing more played out than a gun line is saying a gun line then being like "no I use my rhymes instead" and shit like that. Keep it up though. Quality was a decent, flow was there, I can hear you aimin for that delivery I've been stressin. Keep rollin. -Coleon

[Artille]

Thanks for the yet again great feed. I agree the gun lines are played out (and tbh unrealistic), but that's just the feeling this beat gave me. A hardcore king, who doesn't give a fuck pretty much haha. I definitely took your advice and put a bit more emotion in it, but I think I still need to work on that a bit. Thanks again.

[Instant Legend]

i like the horror feel to this joint, and i like how your voice is hittin, but i think your vocals need to be mixed MUCH better, they dont really mesh at all, just kinda feel tossed on top oof a beat

but you showin some serious potential homie

keep it movin

hollar back folks, some newer shit!

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