Scrubz wrote:I feel like i herd this beat before... it is sick but I feel like the bass and lows may be mixed a bit to high may just be me tho, heh. Right off the bat I notice you energy, and i like it. Think you delivery on this one is a tad, hmmm up? were I think for this type of track needed to be dark. Your flow was great at points but it seemed each verse you had a bar were you kinda fell off. I think it was mostly trying to squeez a few extra words and it kinda messed up the scheme. Hooks average imo, I think you coulda done it a bit better but by no means terrible. Lyrics are pretty good as well.
All in all it was decent track, I think if you got the delivery down a little better and really analyzed your lyrics to make sure they flowed correctly 100% of the time with the given scheme this one could have been a master piece. IT really depicts you. No disrespect with anything I said I'm just not the type of guy to post "dope song man" and leave it at that.
Hopefully you drop some more stuff, and if you do I will deff check it out. Keep at it hommie.

thx for the feed bro. am glad ya enjoyed it...and yeah i agree about the base is mixed and squeezing words..thx for pointing it out bro

...appreciate ur honesty..its mean alot

thx again and glad ya enjoyed it
Big Ax-D wrote:the beat is cool... your voice is too loud tho'.. very over the beat.
lol, the image was moving.. I was like WTF?? haha... lol, why are you and sajjad doing the same thing with your syllables at the end, like extending the words, sounds awfull... lol
I loved the hook.. was that you??... really good man.
Reminds me of the old tracks we used to do in 2005 lmao... very entertaining. Fix your quality man, and get a pop filter...
I enjoyed it a lot.
btw, Im working on a tape with Kez man, our single comes out in 4 days, so come back then lol

yeah mind i feel wat u saying about extending words and shit....ama keep workin on it...and yeah ama get a cool ass pop filter soon by the end of the month....thx alot broo

appreciate ur feed...and yooo its been a while!! lets collab! me u and kez....just like old times sake
Kez wrote:It's good to hear you back Random
The beat is sweet as usual but then again you just grabbed it off Anno Domini so..can't really give you credit for that lol
Your delivery is still enjoyable, but I got to be honest you don't sound any different to your past shit. You're still doing that stuff sometimes where you just drag on a word till the next bar messing up the flow, or where you're ending your verses early with a word and leaving like a huge gap in the beat till the chorus. Really you should start crafting your flows better so that this doesn't happen, cause it makes you sound like you just wrote it in 5 minutes and recorded it without any preparation. I do still enjoy your delivery a lot though, especially when you raise your voice (as you often do in the middle parts of your verses) and stuff. It's a good voice to rap with.
The lyrics, again, they're decent but it's more of the same. I don't really hear anything different in here than I do to the last track I really remember from you, Sandman. It's good, but it's kinda vague and it's really just random venting. It's still enjoyable to listen to, it just seems kinda lazy sometimes. The end of the last verse where you actually seemed to connect the concept slightly was good, but even so.
The hook is nice, cause you always been good at hooks, but it wasn't really all that inventive lol, just basically saying "Ghost in the mirror" over and over. That said i've always enjoyed your hooks and your singing, so that's a given.
It was an enjoyable track, but if I compare it to your previous stuff it's basically the same song, so I felt I had to point that out lol. Also, one thing that I feel might hold you back is that nearly every track I hear from you it's just a Soundclick beat that has been grabbed from being popular at the time haha. So it's kind of interchangable and it means that every track you do 500 other people will have done one to it as well. I hope you're working on a project or something so we can hear more concentrated work from you. As I say though it's good to hear something from you again! I hope you make more stuff.
wooow thx alot for breakdown bro

and yeah i got ur point about ending the verses early with a word and leaving a huge gap until the chorus...well yeah ama admit it was laziness and excitment at the same time..cuz sometimes i reach to a level of writer's block..so i just add up some shit to get done with it...and regarding the lyrics ama work on the endings etc......and yeah bro last 6 months i had no inspiration or real motivation to hip hop...i was just not feeling it....but now am back...and am getting my inspiration back

....am glad ya liked the delivery and enjoyed the track

and yeah am workin on an EP...hopefully all of them tracks produced by me...but nothing is confirmed yet...gonnna post the details as soon as i get things in hand....and holla for a collab bro..its been a while! am down anytime..just holla...and thx again for the breakdown man..its means alot
