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Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby RainMan44 » Jun 11th, '11, 23:08

is fucking DOPE :worship:



Life handed me lemons, I jump back into the public eye
And squirted lemon juice in it by now you just wish I’d fuckin' die
But I electrify, get electrocuted, executed by
The execution of my flow too quick for the human eye to detect zoomin' by
Guess who, what’s happenin' guys?
They told me to shit I fell off that pot, hoped right back up on that crapper and I
Said fuck you with a capital I, look who’s back to antagon-on-ize
You don’t like it? You can eat shit, fuck off little faggot and die
You right back like a magnet on my dick grabbing at my shit
Better get to the back of the line, You wanna get your shot at me what kinda crap is that? Bad of a kind
Of rapper would I be before I let another rapper think he’s hot
I’ll bury my face in a stinky twat
And go.....alalalalalalaLA!
Girl my headspace is limited, ain’t even room in the back of my mind (from previous lines that rhymed with back of the line, magnet on my, capital I...although I don't realize why he stopped that rhyme scheme then picked it up again :confusion: )
That’s why I ain’t thinking about you, I don’t got time and I told you a thousand times
So how can I find the time to put an alkaline battery in Royce's back
And at the same time put juice in mine? Goddammit Slaughterhouse is signed
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby HereHere » Jun 12th, '11, 03:20

It's way under-rated on here imo :worship:
Great verse, although the song as a whole is pretty boring.
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby Chet Starr » Jun 12th, '11, 03:23

I liked it, but then Crooked's verse comes in and blows everything up
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Jun 12th, '11, 06:56

It takes a few listens, but it's actually pretty good. Just unfortunately short.
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jun 12th, '11, 08:57

I liked this line a lot for some reason

Life handed me lemons, I jump back into the public eye
And squirted lemon juice in it by now you just wish I’d fuckin' die

honestly sounds like something i'd write. Although Joell kills this song without a doubt.
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby Sekou » Jun 12th, '11, 10:59

Some of the rhymes may be well written, but his flow which is all over the place and horribly structured, along with his unbearable delivery drown the quality of some of the lyrics and make this an awful, weak verse.
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Jun 12th, '11, 11:05

aint a shit on crooked's and joell's though.
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby Almostlity » Jun 12th, '11, 11:21

Eminems verse on Loud Noises is exactly that, loud noises.
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> Alm still goat

> Alm goat


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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby buffalo bill » Jun 12th, '11, 12:40

I don't understand people sometimes, highlighting the rhymes in a mediocre verse and go all WOW GUYS LOOK IT RHYMES!!! :o
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby EminemBase » Jun 12th, '11, 16:55

I liked the verse.

It's not mind-blowing but I remember people saying it was shit and the worst on it :confusion: Royce was EASILY the worst in my opinion. Fucking terrible verse.

Crooked had the best technically I think, and Joe's was nice too.

But I found Em's the most entertaining. As Crooked's was just sort of... lifeless rhyming, kinda robotic. Which, I know was the intention of the sound of the verse but... not particularly entertaining. I think Em's 'twat line' is the funniest on the song, and funniest he's said in a while.
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Jun 12th, '11, 17:05

EminemBase wrote:I liked the verse.

It's not mind-blowing but I remember people saying it was shit and the worst on it :confusion: Royce was EASILY the worst in my opinion. Fucking terrible verse.

Crooked had the best technically I think, and Joe's was nice too.

But I found Em's the most entertaining. As Crooked's was just sort of... lifeless rhyming, kinda robotic. Which, I know was the intention of the sound of the verse but... not particularly entertaining. I think Em's 'twat line' is the funniest on the song, and funniest he's said in a while.


I agree. I think Crooked had the best verse lyrically and technically, but I think Joell had the best delivery, then Em would come second in that category.
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby Sekou » Jun 12th, '11, 17:19

xxTrigger1989xx wrote:
EminemBase wrote:I liked the verse.

It's not mind-blowing but I remember people saying it was shit and the worst on it :confusion: Royce was EASILY the worst in my opinion. Fucking terrible verse.

Crooked had the best technically I think, and Joe's was nice too.

But I found Em's the most entertaining. As Crooked's was just sort of... lifeless rhyming, kinda robotic. Which, I know was the intention of the sound of the verse but... not particularly entertaining. I think Em's 'twat line' is the funniest on the song, and funniest he's said in a while.


I agree. I think Crooked had the best verse lyrically and technically, but I think Joell had the best delivery, then Em would come second in that category.


Some people will just defend Eminem no matter what :shakehead:
Can't you just admit his verse was weak?
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby EminemBase » Jun 12th, '11, 19:01

Sekou wrote:
xxTrigger1989xx wrote:
EminemBase wrote:I liked the verse.

It's not mind-blowing but I remember people saying it was shit and the worst on it :confusion: Royce was EASILY the worst in my opinion. Fucking terrible verse.

Crooked had the best technically I think, and Joe's was nice too.

But I found Em's the most entertaining. As Crooked's was just sort of... lifeless rhyming, kinda robotic. Which, I know was the intention of the sound of the verse but... not particularly entertaining. I think Em's 'twat line' is the funniest on the song, and funniest he's said in a while.


I agree. I think Crooked had the best verse lyrically and technically, but I think Joell had the best delivery, then Em would come second in that category.


Some people will just defend Eminem no matter what :shakehead:
Can't you just admit his verse was weak?


What are you talking about?

If I defended Eminem no matter what I'd say he had the best verse. He clearly didn't and I said Crooked's was the best technically. Which it obviously was.

But which you find the most entertaining is a matter of preference. And nothing Royce, or Crooked said was entertaining, or funny.

Em's twat line was the funniest thing on the song. To me. I didn't say his verse was the strongest though. So you can't say people are defending him no matter what, just because they don't agree that the verse was terrible.
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Jun 12th, '11, 20:51

Sekou wrote:
xxTrigger1989xx wrote:
EminemBase wrote:I liked the verse.

It's not mind-blowing but I remember people saying it was shit and the worst on it :confusion: Royce was EASILY the worst in my opinion. Fucking terrible verse.

Crooked had the best technically I think, and Joe's was nice too.

But I found Em's the most entertaining. As Crooked's was just sort of... lifeless rhyming, kinda robotic. Which, I know was the intention of the sound of the verse but... not particularly entertaining. I think Em's 'twat line' is the funniest on the song, and funniest he's said in a while.


I agree. I think Crooked had the best verse lyrically and technically, but I think Joell had the best delivery, then Em would come second in that category.


Some people will just defend Eminem no matter what :shakehead:
Can't you just admit his verse was weak?


Where did I defend Eminem?

:facepalm

It was weak compared to his other verses, but it wasn't bad. It was better than Royce's definitely, that's his worst verse on the whole EP IMO.
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Re: Eminem's verse on Loud Noises

Postby Kez » Jun 12th, '11, 21:00

antagon-on-ize?

Must be very convenient when you can just extend words by a non-existent syllable to make them rhyme
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