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Re: C-Riz Ft FreeDoom - Wuzz That!!

Postby Kez » Jun 21st, '11, 00:34

Listened to it. It was decent.

Hook was a bit hard to understand, felt like the beat was a bit too loud on it for me to hear you clear. The beat itself was awesome though.

C-Riz your flow was nicee, your delivery was good but I think you shoulda turned your vocals up a little bit, it's pretty quiet like your hook. The delivery on the psycho line especially was nice. Lyrics were good for what the track is, the verse was ended well.

Killa your verse went from average to great, the P.E line made me laugh. I still get a bit irked by your delivery though, it's like I really wanna hear your voice go hard, I can tell you're putting in effort to emote but I dunno, your voice just sounds very similiar on every track I hear lol. Just somethin that irks me. I know it's probably just cause of your quality and other stuff, but whatever.

Was a decent track, I will definately be downloadin that tape when it comes out to see how far you've come.
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Re: C-Riz Ft FreeDoom - Wuzz That!!

Postby Chet Starr » Jun 21st, '11, 08:54

The hook was a bit hard to understand, but it was enjoyable.

C-Riz pulls in another good verse....I got no complains really, maybe a switch in the flow would of made it more interesting.

DOOM compared to I Need A Doctor, this is shit loads better. I can understand you perfectly here (accent wise) I don't care bout sound quality so it was no problem for me. It was also pretty damn funny. I'm impressived ol' boy
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Re: C-Riz Ft FreeDoom - Wuzz That!!

Postby Chet Starr » Jun 21st, '11, 11:18

Alright just don't expect anything :coffee:
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Re: C-Riz Ft FreeDoom - Wuzz That!!

Postby Tornado » Jun 21st, '11, 13:09

Beat was decent enough, but since i listened to this on shitty laptop speakers , the chorus was almost impossible to hear without turning it up fully.

For Rizzy's part, he sounds more comfortable and smoother with the flow than before, but it does need more work cos it still sounds forced sometimes. Tbh the slow beat didn't help very much, makes you either strecth words or have not the right amount of syllables in a line. Lyrics were nothing special and overall the verse didn't really keep intrest

Killa, only real complaint is the delievery, kinda like Kez said. It's hard to pinpoint cos i feel some of my old tracks suffer from that aswell. It's the balance of the emotion of the delivery against overdoing it. Other than that, pretty decent verse
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Re: C-Riz Ft FreeDoom - Wuzz That!!

Postby Scrubz » Jun 21st, '11, 14:07

c-riz your part was pleasantly good imo. You have a sick flow and some good ass rhymes. You are a little hard to hear/understand especially in the hook. Doom aside from the obvious single layer business, it wasn't bad. but it seemed as though you were off at points, rhymes didnt hit were they needed to and seemed a bit rushed. and like others said you need to up your delivery, it got a little boring.

pretty good track guys :y:
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Re: C-Riz Ft FreeDoom - Wuzz That!!

Postby Scrubz » Jun 21st, '11, 22:17

FreeDoom wrote:Cheers for the feed bro. :b:
np, lemme know what u think of my new joint, its with tom chambers called summer time. :worship:
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Re: C-Riz Ft FreeDoom - Wuzz That!!

Postby classthe_king » Jun 21st, '11, 22:24

The chorus was horrible, just saying


C-Riz's main problem was that his voice had no power in it whatsoever...if that makes sense. Maybe it was something with the mixing or maybe the quality. The sound your verse had is something he should be aiming at though.

Your verse was pretty good. It wasn't anything where I said, damn he killed that, after listening to it but there wasn't anything better that stood out. I guess the only thing I can say is improve your lyrics, though they weren't bad to begin with.
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Re: C-Riz Ft FreeDoom - Wuzz That!!

Postby B.A.D. » Jul 11th, '11, 10:27

I've been wanting to feed this song for a while, I heard it already a couple times

man, C-Riz keeps improving, crazy... Only thing on here is the accent sounds really really weird haha, sounds like a different delivery, you sound crazier but its way harder to understand you... but I did loved it, nodding my head to the hook... bomb

Mr. British... Ladies & Genoman, Welcum to De Fridom Show!... lol... j/k
your quality is pretti fucking good, big ups on that man... I think you just have to work more on your flow and thats bout it... but like really practice the flow a lot... Great job both
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I loved this song, is there a download link on the youtube page??
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