Ok this is down for two verse of 16 lines each with flipping in the second verse but if u guys wanna agree on sumin else e.g. just one veres instead thats coll jus say ur piece b4 we start
Good Luck!!
yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
Mc Cubz wrote:[size=75]Ya allowed a rhyme but first arrange each TR member ta crowd around ya shrine
Cos Aguan-is died in 1274 vowed devine so only place ya livin now is cloud nine
Ya need ta confine ya lines cos they drag on like a thesis/ ensuring ya down-fall like faeces
Ma lyrical pieces ensure deceases, so
Mc Cubz wrote:[size=75]Im urgin ya ta retire cos wid dat name an dem lyrics its clealy a troubled un-medicated turrets emerging
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walend wrote:i don't think you got a dope verse if you must explain whats in your verse => typical for NetC's.
Mc Cubz wrote:cheers fordie.
to walend
Its only my word and youd have to accept it, but I promise I could keep each line onto one bar on a hip hop beat with u being able to understand the audio. im gona try an audio it for you to prove i dont lie. By the way, this is besdies the point but, in England we have garage I know plenty of mcs who would be cruising in terms of speed with them amount of lyricsper line on one bar of beats. I can go fast or slow, re-listen to busta rhymes break ya neck - busta can get up rapid speed on da mic and not only do we have speed garage in england, but the hip hop beats are slower and you can fit loads more words per bar, Furthermore, I could just get a hip hop beat that is particularly slow an be cruising on da lyrics I posted. Please, please dont say you dont think im capable of spitting my posted lyrics cos it looks bad when people are voting which isnt fair when it aint true. I dont mean any disrespect by that, Its jus reli important to me this battle.
The only reason I explained abit on my first verse is because some people may not b aware of who Thomas Aguanis is i.e. a saint, because if da ppl didnt know that the verse would lose most of its effect. Im not sayin TR ppl dont know there history I just did it because before this battle I didnt know who thomas aguanis was i.e. a saint an I got a good education. I neva put explaintations on any other verse hence my other battles an my 2nd verse.
Despite what you think, and this is only my opinion, both my verses were "dope", regardless of whatver tom comes up with, I mean I dont think I would be in the final and I wouldnt post if I didnt think they were. Its like your only criticising me I mean you could of at least picked a faul with toms or sed one good thing about mine.
you might not of meant to say dat it cant be dope cos u did ssay both 1st verses wer dope so If thats da case ma last paragraph aint necessary.
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