Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

[classthe_king]

Well I had time to record today and I got tired of recording shit for the mixtape and for random collabs so I just decided to do this real quick.




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http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=118122&p=1690252#p1690252

[classthe_king]

Just curious, is there any delivery of mine that you have liked? Or do you just hate my white voice in general?

[classthe_king]

Just curious, is there any delivery of mine that you have liked? Or do you just hate my white voice in general?

Not at all, your delivery in that Chambers/Sajjad track was great, and that "White & Blue" freestyle. But for some wicked reason I just don't like your delivery on this.

Alright, I think it was the beat. It felt like I was forcing everything. If you liked those tracks though then you're going to love some songs I got comin soon.

[Master Chief]

I'm feeling very, very happy and generous today. Probably the happiest I've been in months and the day is only going to get better so I will put all bias aside to judge this song + I will say that your delivery on the Fire Flame song was good, but it was real dope in the whole part where you said "I may be nerd but etc...". I really liked that aggresive tone and the slight increase in speed of your flow.

Now, this song. First, I love the beat. I was thinking of writing to it before. The lyrics didn't fit the beat that much tbh. They would sound better on a darker beat but this beat is still awesome so I enjoyed it. You have your rhyming down, obviously. Your lyrics themselves were kind of generic but this is a throwaway verse BUT I still have to judge it as a piece of music. Your delivery on here was meh but better than what it used to be. You should use the Fire Flame delivery more often. Now... your flow could be better and I feel like you didn't ride the beat perfectly but nothing was really off-beat. Try rapping faster. I also suggest you try to slightly switch up your delivery. Most of your tracks sound the same.

P.S. this song and Fire Flame are slightly changing my perspective of you as a rapper.

Out.

[Robbie G]

It wasn't bad, but it wasn't overly impressive. Like I enjoyed listening to it but nothing about it really impressed me. But I understand it was just a random verse so for what it is it was pretty good.

I thought the talking in the beginning was a little corny though.. "It's that new shit"

Looking forward to the EP

[Devil'sAdvocate]

all bias aside,i like the beat,lyrics are okay,rhyming is good,but why do you like you are slurring and blubbering the whole piece,the way the words are coming out of your mouse is weird

[Enimee]

was this really a freestyle

[TripleNineThree]

Voice - I really liked your voice, you have a good rapping voice - 10/10

Flow - Your flow was also suprisingly really good, you flowed really good to the beat - 10/10

Delivery - Delivery was also really good haha, it could have been slightly better - 9/10

Lyrics - If this was really a freestyle I would be amazed haha the lyrics are good but I'm guessing they are written lol - 9/10

Mixing - Mixing was really good, I don't think you did much to mix it besides just record over it but you must have a really good EQ on your voice or just record with a really good mic because it still sounded really good!

Goodjob bro! Do you mind returning the feed?? - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=119388

[MattDubois]

That was good man your sounds a bit forced but I really liked some of your lines like "Cant stop the hook like Kareem" great job man!

[classthe_king]

Thanks for all the feed, I guess I just need to be more selective with my beats, I'll return feed later

[Phantom]

beat isnt bad i liked it. you get stronger with every verse man, you get better very quickly im impressed

[classthe_king]

Thanks man

[Tornado]

My main gripe is beat selection because it didn't really suit the flow you had as when you rap slow to these kinda beats, it can get boring and it's easy to slip slightly offbeat although is does allow your delivery and lyrics to take more focus. For a short track it's good but if you switched it up with your Fire Flame/Zip And A Double Cup flow, it'd bee more intresting throughtout. Not bad though, can see potential for you.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for listening and yeah the beat selection was bad but shit happens

[classthe_king]

I'm not a fan of the beat, and I don't think it gelled well with your style tbh. I've heard some of your other songs and I think you sound a ton better when you're rapping a little bit quicker. Not saying this was bad, it was just average in my opinion.

But I liked the know that i'm dope / flow that I've wrote / go for the throat etc. rhyme scheme the most. Sounded very smooth and not forced at all.

Thanks, you should check out my Zip And A Double Cup Remix if you like a fast flow

http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=118851&p=1699043