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Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Sweet Tooth Wins)

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Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Sweet Tooth Wins)

Postby Suicide » Jul 20th, '11, 17:42

16 Bars. First to 3 wins.

Standard voting:

(3) Punchlines
(3) Personals
(2) Multies
(1) Flow
(1) Structure
(1) Vocab/Complex
(1) Other


My verse below:
Got a sweet tooth, well welcome to a diet
You tried to act gangsta, but no one would buy it
Sweet tooths cause cavities so here's the dentist
Your an easy target, coz in here you're defenseless
After this battle you'll wish that your life's a dream
Because, I just blessed you with low self esteem
You need help if you thought those rhymes were dope
Must've been high on coke, coz your just a big joke
Sweet-tooth, please accept the fact that your wack
and your not black, coz you done proved you can't rap.
You made a thread about yourself, attention whore
In this battle you'll get mopped like a kitchen floor
Face it, on that thread you'll never ever get a notice
And you winning this battle is pretty much hopeless
Admit it, behind that computer your really a lying nerd
Your ten facts are so fake everyone was crying absurd!


2. He acted like a gangsta in the ten facts thread. http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=113785

5. He posted a song called Life's a Dream. http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=115822&p=1661552&hilit=Lifes+a+Dream#p1661552

10. He said he's Italian, but he's basically a 100% black coz he grew up with them. (In the ten facts section)
11. He made a thread about himself. http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=29&t=118426&hilit=Sweet_Tooth

13. Nobody even responded to his thread about him, just sorta made fun of him.
16. He posted in the ten facts section. They were all stuff making him sound gangsta.

Sweet_Tooth's verse
shit's silly you really think this kiddy can fuck with me?/
this itty bitty unwitty wanna-be in the rap committee/
grab a titty cause your raps are shitty and you need to get breast fed/
half my competitors split town, other half just rest dead/
your mother said I had a sweet tooth/
maybe it was from her pussy juice/
Your rhymes are jokes, lemme guess, you couldn’t find-the- scope/
I’ll have leave you tasting shit, cause your rhymes-aint-dope/
Ima design your face just like a kaleidoscope/
If you anger me, my knifes gonna collide-with-ya-throat/
You wanna act famous, maybe on your corner where you buy-the-coke/(cocaine)
But round here? I couldn’t find you with a mi-cro-scope/
To me this aint even a battle/
Cause I don’t fuck with bitches with 10 cent value/
You call yourself suicide cause deep inside you wanna cry/
It aint my fault your parents left you to die and then every foster family you went to you got denied/
Last edited by Suicide on Jul 29th, '11, 19:54, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth

Postby BigBoss » Jul 21st, '11, 03:41

ready?

also, post this in backstage to, itll get more views
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth

Postby Chet Starr » Jul 21st, '11, 04:01

Don't spam post a topic dude
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth

Postby BigBoss » Jul 21st, '11, 04:02

posting here is where it belongs, i posted it in backstage to for more views, is that ok?
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth

Postby Suicide » Jul 21st, '11, 22:56

Added my verse. Post yours and I'll edit it in. Good luck. :y:
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth

Postby BigBoss » Jul 22nd, '11, 07:53

shit's silly you really think this kiddy can fuck with me?/
this itty bitty unwitty wanna-be in the rap committee/
grab a titty cause your raps are shitty and you need to get breast fed/
half my competitors split town, other half just rest dead/
your mother said I had a sweet tooth/
maybe it was from her pussy juice/
Your rhymes are jokes, lemme guess, you couldn’t find-the- scope/
I’ll have leave you tasting shit, cause your rhymes-aint-dope/
Ima design your face just like a kaleidoscope/
If you anger me, my knifes gonna collide-with-ya-throat/
You wanna act famous, maybe on your corner where you buy-the-coke/(cocaine)
But round here? I couldn’t find you with a mi-cro-scope/
To me this aint even a battle/
Cause I don’t fuck with bitches with 10 cent value/
You call yourself suicide cause deep inside you wanna cry/
It aint my fault your parents left you to die and then every foster family you went to you got denied/
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby Suicide » Jul 22nd, '11, 17:53

Now we wait. :smoking:
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby BigBoss » Jul 22nd, '11, 18:29

u wanna just make new thread for it? then delete this one, so its more fresh without all these comments lol
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby J.R. » Jul 23rd, '11, 00:32

Both were MAD forced, but Sweet, it goes to you for a few decent lines, which both of you had, you just more so than suicide. but yeah, not a battle of legends by any means. Good battle, though. Elevation is key..


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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby BigBoss » Jul 23rd, '11, 03:00

:y:
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby Suicide » Jul 23rd, '11, 05:52

BShady14 wrote:Both were MAD forced, but Sweet, it goes to you for a few decent lines, which both of you had, you just more so than suicide. but yeah, not a battle of legends by any means. Good battle, though. Elevation is key..


v/ Sweet. :y:


Don't count man. You didn't go in depth enough. Use the voting system and I'll accept it.
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby J.R. » Jul 23rd, '11, 06:11

Suicide

(0/3) Punchlines, 1st line. Corny and wack as shit. 3rd line, LOL. Jk, wasn't funny, also wack and extremely retarded. Nice effort. Give you A d for that shit. Kitchen floor line~ About as good as "window pane" line. Seriously, step it up son! 0/3
(2/3) Personals~ just overall weak, took some decent shots, so 2.
(1/2) Multies~ Very few, 1
(1/1) Flow~ Pretty good.
(1/1) Structure~ Seen worse.
(0/1) Vocab/Complex~ so. fucking. simple.
(0/1) Other~ Eh, Elevate.

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Sweet tooth

(2/3) Punchlines~ Some were dope, some were wack.
(0/3) Personals~ Where. the fuck are they?
(2/2) Multies~ :worship:
(1/1) Flow~ nicely, some lines were awkward.
(1/1) Structure~ See above^
(1/1) Vocab/Complex~ Nice.
(0/1) Other~ Notta.

7.

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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby BigBoss » Jul 23rd, '11, 06:20

tbh i used the last 2 lines as personals , i didnt wanna look up hsi fuckin posts lol
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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby Mr Change » Jul 23rd, '11, 07:58

BShady14 wrote:Suicide

(0/3) Punchlines, 1st line. Corny and wack as shit. 3rd line, LOL. Jk, wasn't funny, also wack and extremely retarded. Nice effort. Give you A d for that shit. Kitchen floor line~ About as good as "window pane" line. Seriously, step it up son! 0/3
(2/3) Personals~ just overall weak, took some decent shots, so 2.
(1/2) Multies~ Very few, 1
(1/1) Flow~ Pretty good.
(1/1) Structure~ Seen worse.
(0/1) Vocab/Complex~ so. fucking. simple.
(0/1) Other~ Eh, Elevate.


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Re: Suicide vs Sweet Tooth (Voting Open)

Postby BigBoss » Jul 23rd, '11, 08:53

GoinThruChanges wrote:
BShady14 wrote:Suicide

(0/3) Punchlines, 1st line. Corny and wack as shit. 3rd line, LOL. Jk, wasn't funny, also wack and extremely retarded. Nice effort. Give you A d for that shit. Kitchen floor line~ About as good as "window pane" line. Seriously, step it up son! 0/3
(2/3) Personals~ just overall weak, took some decent shots, so 2.
(1/2) Multies~ Very few, 1
(1/1) Flow~ Pretty good.
(1/1) Structure~ Seen worse.
(0/1) Vocab/Complex~ so. fucking. simple.
(0/1) Other~ Eh, Elevate.


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why the unsure?

you should vote man :smoking:
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