(3) Personals
(2) Multies
(1) Flow
(1) Structure
(1) Vocab/Complex
(1) Other
My verse:
Man, your twenty years old and still doing text
Probably still a virgin, ain't never ever had sex
Been here five years, you probably got no life
And I know Imma win, your personals are ripe
TheEminemShow already buried you with ease
Bitch leave, the forum don't need wack emcees
Beatin you is a breeze, I bring defeat to enemies
Said you was down, go get back on your knees
Been battling for years and your still not known
I felt so bad for you, I had to throw you a bone
After TES beat you ya went and threw a bitch fit
Couldn't handle bein beat by a girl, eat a big dick
You already made threats, looks like your a e-thug
Well, in this battle I'm Eyedea and your just E-Dub
Everyone would rather be a clit rider than a dick rider
My skill is way higher than this liar, now go expire
1-2: He's 20 years old and still doing text battles.
3-4: He's been here for like five years.
5-6: TheEminemShow beat him. Personal jab.
7-8: I used the word enemies. (Play on his name.) In my call-out thread, he said I'm down. I made it a blow job joke.
9-10: He seems to have been battling for years, but no one knows him. I felt so sorry for him I accepted our battle, coz he needs an easy win.
11-12: He acted like he should've won the battle between him and TheEminemShow.
13-14: He threatened Classtheking or something a long time ago. Found it out by searching posts. Eyedea and E-dub are battle-rappers. Eyedea slaughtered E-dub in a battle.
15-16: He kept complaining about clit riders in his battle against TheEminemShow. Go expire means die.
Enimee's Verse
me verses suicide its do or die, no matter what you do, you die
truth is eye, wouldnt provide, good lyrics for someone below the tide
say hi to grave, my flow is fly, like marty, you couldnt buy the name
your holdin guys, hopin eye dont spot it, from atop my tidal wave
i ride in, on a board made of bones and crushed skulls
tr battle rappers noses, and crunched thumbs, all my foes got clutched balls
or grasped uterus's, thats truthfulness, i wouldnt lose if yall didnt have computers, shiiiit
the day i dont blast fruits with wit, or have unmatched gruesome spit
is the day TES's clit gets an actual two inch dick, but thats more then hopefull
ill hop through suicide's forum post tool, and use the ethernet cord to choke you
your lines are too forced and close to, trash that i refuse to even stomach half it
seriously THAT WAS IT, but let me stop this is a non acrobatic event, ill fuckin smack this bitch
show him the real meanin of rappin intense, than crack in his head, with his MAC till hes dead
this dudes only hope to be faster is sped, then he can say the casket is his actual bed,
ive mastered the pen, so ill use this syringe and needle to prove that my musics live
im the root of all sin, your evil, distant and feeble, my lyrics will get suicide, euthanized