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Suicide vs Enimee (Suicide Wins)

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Suicide vs Enimee (Suicide Wins)

Postby Suicide » Jul 28th, '11, 02:23

(3) Punchlines
(3) Personals
(2) Multies
(1) Flow
(1) Structure
(1) Vocab/Complex
(1) Other

My verse:
Man, your twenty years old and still doing text
Probably still a virgin, ain't never ever had sex
Been here five years, you probably got no life
And I know Imma win, your personals are ripe
TheEminemShow already buried you with ease
Bitch leave, the forum don't need wack emcees
Beatin you is a breeze, I bring defeat to enemies
Said you was down, go get back on your knees
Been battling for years and your still not known
I felt so bad for you, I had to throw you a bone
After TES beat you ya went and threw a bitch fit
Couldn't handle bein beat by a girl, eat a big dick
You already made threats, looks like your a e-thug
Well, in this battle I'm Eyedea and your just E-Dub
Everyone would rather be a clit rider than a dick rider
My skill is way higher than this liar, now go expire


1-2: He's 20 years old and still doing text battles.

3-4: He's been here for like five years.

5-6: TheEminemShow beat him. Personal jab.

7-8: I used the word enemies. (Play on his name.) In my call-out thread, he said I'm down. I made it a blow job joke.

9-10: He seems to have been battling for years, but no one knows him. I felt so sorry for him I accepted our battle, coz he needs an easy win.

11-12: He acted like he should've won the battle between him and TheEminemShow.

13-14: He threatened Classtheking or something a long time ago. Found it out by searching posts. Eyedea and E-dub are battle-rappers. Eyedea slaughtered E-dub in a battle.

15-16: He kept complaining about clit riders in his battle against TheEminemShow. Go expire means die.

Enimee's Verse
me verses suicide its do or die, no matter what you do, you die
truth is eye, wouldnt provide, good lyrics for someone below the tide
say hi to grave, my flow is fly, like marty, you couldnt buy the name
your holdin guys, hopin eye dont spot it, from atop my tidal wave
i ride in, on a board made of bones and crushed skulls
tr battle rappers noses, and crunched thumbs, all my foes got clutched balls
or grasped uterus's, thats truthfulness, i wouldnt lose if yall didnt have computers, shiiiit
the day i dont blast fruits with wit, or have unmatched gruesome spit
is the day TES's clit gets an actual two inch dick, but thats more then hopefull
ill hop through suicide's forum post tool, and use the ethernet cord to choke you
your lines are too forced and close to, trash that i refuse to even stomach half it
seriously THAT WAS IT, but let me stop this is a non acrobatic event, ill fuckin smack this bitch
show him the real meanin of rappin intense, than crack in his head, with his MAC till hes dead
this dudes only hope to be faster is sped, then he can say the casket is his actual bed,
ive mastered the pen, so ill use this syringe and needle to prove that my musics live
im the root of all sin, your evil, distant and feeble, my lyrics will get suicide, euthanized
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee

Postby Sam. » Jul 28th, '11, 11:08

You already made threats, looks like your a e-thug
Well, in this battle I'm Eyedea and your just E-Dub

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Re: Suicide vs Enimee

Postby Suicide » Jul 28th, '11, 19:52

MCSam wrote:
You already made threats, looks like your a e-thug
Well, in this battle I'm Eyedea and your just E-Dub

:y:


I've had that line saved for a while, but this battle seemed like the best place to use it.

Waiting for Enimee to drop. :coffee:
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee

Postby Enimee » Jul 28th, '11, 22:32

me verses suicide its do or die, no matter what you do, you die
truth is eye, wouldnt provide, good lyrics for someone below the tide
say hi to grave, my flow is fly, like marty, you couldnt buy the name
your holdin guys, hopin eye dont spot it, from atop my tidal wave
i ride in, on a board made of bones and crushed skulls
tr battle rappers noses, and crunched thumbs, all my foes got clutched balls
or grasped uterus's, thats truthfulness, i wouldnt lose if yall didnt have computers, shiiiit
the day i dont blast fruits with wit, or have unmatched gruesome spit
is the day TES's clit gets an actual two inch dick, but thats more then hopefull
ill hop through suicide's forum post tool, and use the ethernet cord to choke you
your lines are too forced and close to, trash that i refuse to even stomach half it
seriously THAT WAS IT, but let me stop this is a non acrobatic event, ill fuckin smack this bitch
show him the real meanin of rappin intense, than crack in his head, with his MAC till hes dead
this dudes only hope to be faster is sped, then he can say the casket is his actual bed,
ive mastered the pen, so ill use this syringe and needle to prove that my musics live
im the root of all sin, your evil, distant and feeble, my lyrics will get suicide, euthanized


fuck structure and personals, and givin a breakdown,

shits weak
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Drug.Ballad » Jul 28th, '11, 22:42

Lots of battles these days.
Both great verses.

(3) Punchlines - Enimee
(3) Personals - Suicide
(2) Multies - N/A
(1) Flow - Suicide
(1) Structure - Suicide
(1) Vocab/Complex - Enimee
(1) Other - N/A


5-4 to Suicide
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Suicide » Jul 28th, '11, 22:44

TheEminemShow wrote:Lots of battles these days.
Both great verses.

(3) Punchlines - Enimee
(3) Personals - Suicide
(2) Multies - N/A
(1) Flow - Suicide
(1) Structure - Suicide
(1) Vocab/Complex - Enimee
(1) Other - N/A


5-4 to Suicide


Appreciate the vote. :worship:

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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Enimee » Jul 29th, '11, 03:58

Multis=N/A...

thts not cause i mentioned you is it...smd

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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Drug.Ballad » Jul 29th, '11, 11:38

Enimee wrote:Multis=N/A...

thts not cause i mentioned you is it...smd

lol


no, i liked the shoutout lol
and i dont know what smd stands for.

I have a bad habbit of putting N/A instead of tie/draw. I didnt leave much feedback either:

Enimee had the better punchlines, and i really liked how he started the verse off..
me verses suicide its do or die, no matter what you do, you die


Suicide had more and better personals.

Suicide took the structure and flow votes, it was just easier to follow, and some lines from Enimee were a little bit to long.

As for multi's. Im not the best at judging them cuz i dont pick them up straight away, so reading it again, Enimee's are more impressive because of the vocab (which he got the points for), but both had some good internals, thats why neither one of you got the points.

Enimee took vocab by a long shot. Its actually quite impressive.

And Enimee, i feel that in this case you would benefit from breaking it down, because i wasnt sure why you was writting 'eye'.
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Sam. » Jul 29th, '11, 11:53

(3) Punchlines enimee just for having more even though suicide had a killer punch is his shit[the one tht i pointef out] u tke this .
(3) Personals suicide with the tes jabs
(2) Multies enimee no doubt
(1) Flow enimee
(1) Structure suicide short bars .
(1) Vocab/Complex enimee had more rough words in his verse .
(1) Other enimee smooth as fuck verse

Suicide vs Enimee
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Jul 29th, '11, 12:08

(3) Punchlines - Enimee
(3) Personals - Suicide
(2) Multies - there was little to no multies
(1) Flow - Suicide
(1) Structure - Suicide
(1) Vocab/Complex - Enimee
(1) Other - N/A


winner: suicide.
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee

Postby Sam. » Jul 29th, '11, 12:23

Enimee wrote:me verses suicide its do or die, no matter what you do, you die
truth is eye, wouldnt provide, good lyrics for someone below the tide
say hi to grave, my flow is fly, like marty, you couldnt buy the name
your holdin guys, hopin eye dont spot it, from atop my tidal wave
i ride in, on a board made of bones and crushed skulls
tr battle rappers noses, and crunched thumbs, all my foes got clutched balls
or grasped uterus's, thats truthfulness, i wouldnt lose if yall didnt have computers, shiiiit
the day i dont blast fruits with wit, or have unmatched gruesome spit
is the day TES's clit gets an actual two inch dick, but thats more then hopefull
ill hop through suicide's forum post tool, and use the ethernet cord to choke you
your lines are too forced and close to, trash that i refuse to even stomach half it
seriously THAT WAS IT, but let me stop this is a non acrobatic event, ill fuckin smack this bitch
show him the real meanin of rappin intense, than crack in his head, with his MAC till hes dead
this dudes only hope to be faster is sped, then he can say the casket is his actual bed,
ive mastered the pen, so ill use this syringe and needle to prove that my musics live
im the root of all sin, your evil, distant and feeble, my lyrics will get suicide, euthanized


fuck structure and personals, and givin a breakdown,

shits weak

*shrug

even suicide had some 2 lazy to pnt em out . :coffee:
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Jul 29th, '11, 12:26

MCSam wrote:
Enimee wrote:me verses suicide its do or die, no matter what you do, you die
truth is eye, wouldnt provide, good lyrics for someone below the tide
say hi to grave, my flow is fly, like marty, you couldnt buy the name
your holdin guys, hopin eye dont spot it, from atop my tidal wave
i ride in, on a board made of bones and crushed skulls
tr battle rappers noses, and crunched thumbs, all my foes got clutched balls
or grasped uterus's, thats truthfulness, i wouldnt lose if yall didnt have computers, shiiiit
the day i dont blast fruits with wit, or have unmatched gruesome spit
is the day TES's clit gets an actual two inch dick, but thats more then hopefull
ill hop through suicide's forum post tool, and use the ethernet cord to choke you
your lines are too forced and close to, trash that i refuse to even stomach half it
seriously THAT WAS IT, but let me stop this is a non acrobatic event, ill fuckin smack this bitch
show him the real meanin of rappin intense, than crack in his head, with his MAC till hes dead
this dudes only hope to be faster is sped, then he can say the casket is his actual bed,
ive mastered the pen, so ill use this syringe and needle to prove that my musics live
im the root of all sin, your evil, distant and feeble, my lyrics will get suicide, euthanized


fuck structure and personals, and givin a breakdown,

shits weak

*shrug

even suicide had some 2 lazy to pnt em out . :coffee:

half these dont rhyme
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Sam. » Jul 29th, '11, 12:29

^ lol
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Suicide » Jul 29th, '11, 17:05

Appreciate the votes.

2-1 for me so far.
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Re: Suicide vs Enimee (Voting Open)

Postby Sam. » Jul 29th, '11, 18:35

how many votes for the win.
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