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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby 2PointOBoy » Aug 4th, '11, 16:10

Cosh wrote:Since I'm in a position to talk to these kids and they listen
I ain't no politician but I'll kick it with em a minute
Cause see they call me a menace and if the shoe fits I'll wear it
But if it don't, then ya'll swallow the truth grin and bear it
Now who's the king of these rude ludicrous lucrative lyrics
Who could inherit the title, put the youth in hysterics
Using his music to steer it sharing his views and his merits
But there's a huge interference they're sayin you shouldn't hear it
Maybe it's hatred I spew, maybe it's food for the spirit
Maybe it's beautiful music I made for you to just cherish
But I'm debated disputed hated and viewed in America
as a motherfuckin drug addict like you didn't experiment?
Now now, that's when you start to stare at who's in the mirror
and see yourself as a kid again, and you get embarrassed
And I got nothing to do but make you look stupid as parents
You fuckin do-gooders - too bad you couldn't DO-GOOD at marriage!
And do you have any clue what I had to do to get here I don't
think you do so stay tuned and keep your ears glued to the stereo
Cause here we go, he's {Jigga durra Jigga da chk Jigga}
And I'm the sinister, Mr. Kiss-My-Ass it's just the..

the last 4 bars are a mystery to me.


The "shoe fits I'll wear it/truth grin and bear it" is fuckin' dope :worship:

And the last four bars are just Eminem's genius, its like fucking one single bar. He manages to flow thanks to the "oo" sounds.

And do you have any clue what I had to do to get here?
I don't think you do, so stay tuned and keep your ears glued to the stereo
Cause here we go, he's {Jigga durra Jigga da chk Jigga}
And I'm the sinister, Mister. Kiss-My-Ass it's just the.
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby makaveli21 » Aug 4th, '11, 21:08

2PointOBoy wrote:"Say Goodbye Hollywood"

[Verse 1]
I thought I had it all figured out, I did
I thought I was tough enough to stick it out with Kim
But I wasn't tough enough to juggle two things at once
I found myself layin' on my knees in cuffs
Which should've been a reason enough, for me to get my stuff and just leave
How come I couldn't see this shit myself, it's just me
Nobody couldn't see this shit I felt
Knowin' damn well she wasn't gonna be there when I fell, to catch me
The minute shit was heated she just bailed
i'm standin' here swingin' on like thirty people by myself
I couldn't even see the millimeter when it fell
Turned around saw Gary stashin' the heater in his belt
Saw the bouncers rush him and beat him to the ground
I just sold two million records, I don't need to go to jail
I'm not about to lose my freedom (over) no female
I need to slow down
Try to get my feet on solid ground, so for now I'm...

He stretches the [underline+italicized] parts while enunciating. The [italicized] words are repeated in successive bars. And the [underlined] words are rhyming words scattered around the verse. And also, throughout the verse he uses a lot of words where the emphasis is on the "L" sound.


this don't even match up syllable count wise
u have no idead what u talking about.
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby makaveli21 » Aug 4th, '11, 21:15

See I'm a poet to some, a regular modern day Shakespeare Jesus Christ the King of these Latter Day Saints here To shatter the picture in which of that as they paint me
as a mother of hate, Satan and scatter brained atheist But that ain't the case , see it's a matter of taste We as a people decide if Shady's as bad as they say he is Or is he the ladder, a gateway to escape?
Media scapegoat, they can be mad at today
See it's as easy as cake , simple as whistling Dixie while I'm wavin the pistol at sixty Christians against me Go to war with the Mormons, take a bath with the Catholics
in holy water no wonder they try to hold me under longer I'm a motherfuckin spiteful, delightful eyeful The new Ice Cube , motherfuckers hate to like you What did I do? (huh) I'm just a kid from the gutter makin this butter off these bloodsuckers, cause I'm a muh'fuckin

to me this one of eminem's
best usage of a
multi syllable rhyme scheme.
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby makaveli21 » Aug 4th, '11, 21:17

makaveli21 wrote:
2PointOBoy wrote:"Say Goodbye Hollywood"

[Verse 1]
I thought I had it all figured out, I did
I thought I was tough enough to stick it out with Kim
But I wasn't tough enough to juggle two things at once
I found myself layin' on my knees in cuffs
Which should've been a reason enough, for me to get my stuff and just leave
How come I couldn't see this shit myself, it's just me
Nobody couldn't see this shit I felt
Knowin' damn well she wasn't gonna be there when I fell, to catch me
The minute shit was heated she just bailed
i'm standin' here swingin' on like thirty people by myself
I couldn't even see the millimeter when it fell
Turned around saw Gary stashin' the heater in his belt
Saw the bouncers rush him and beat him to the ground
I just sold two million records, I don't need to go to jail
I'm not about to lose my freedom (over) no female
I need to slow down
Try to get my feet on solid ground, so for now I'm...

He stretches the [underline+italicized] parts while enunciating. The [italicized] words are repeated in successive bars. And the [underlined] words are rhyming words scattered around the verse. And also, throughout the verse he uses a lot of words where the emphasis is on the "L" sound.


this don't even match up syllable count wise
u have no idea what u talking about.
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby Trimss » Aug 4th, '11, 21:37

Yo.. Slim Shady!
Yo.. I'll fuckin.. I'll..
I'll puke, eat it, and freak you (eww)t
Battle? I'm too weeded to speak to
The only key that I see to defeat you
would be for me to remove these two Adidas and beat you
and force feed you 'em both, and on each feet is a cleat shoe
I'll lift you off your feet so fast with a roundhouse
you'll think I pulled the fuckin ground out from underneath you
(Bitch!) I ain't no fuckin G, I'm a cannibal
I ain't tryin to shoot you,
I'm tryin to chop you into pieces and eat you
Wrap you in rope and plastic, stab you with broken glass
and have you with open gashes strapped to a soakin mattress
Coke and acid, black magic, cloaks and daggers (ahhh!)
Fuck the planet, until it spins on a broken axis
I'm so bananas I'm showin up to your open casket
to fill it full of explosive gasses
and close it back with a lit match in it
while I sit back and just hope it catches
Blow you to fragments
Laugh, roll you and smoke the ashes


I started to highlight the rhymes but i'm just too lazy and tired so, it's the hellbound verse. Just read ityou'll notice the multies.
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby Innovation » Aug 4th, '11, 21:53

makaveli21 wrote:this don't even match up syllable count wise
u have no idead what u talking about.


His highlighting was fine. He missed a few rhymes but his syllable count did match up.
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Aug 4th, '11, 22:03

@innovation

the makaveli dude is a troll plus he is the second account of a banned member called jeulz21
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby Innovation » Aug 4th, '11, 22:05

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:@innovation

the makaveli dude is a troll plus he is the second account of a banned member called jeulz21


Ah. Thanks for the heads up lol. :flower: Btw, when I've finished highlighting LYWTL, I think you'll appreciate the song that much more. :y:
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby Elision » Aug 5th, '11, 10:43

3rd verse of Oh No and first verse of Things Get Worse. Everything at and after "cause they used to love her hooters, now Carmen Electra's cuter" makes me fucking melt :worship:

Also, the entire 3rd verse of Oh No is one long ass multi. Same with that freestyle he did that starts with "Peace to Thirsten Howl, A.L. and Wordsworth" and "I'm keepin it raw, illegal and Melik and Jamal" from the booth
i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby ArsheyHaq » Aug 6th, '11, 05:26

Hell Bound verse and/or No One's Iller Than Me.

Wrap you in rope and plastic, stab you with broken glass
And have you with open gashes strapped to a soakin mattress
Coke and acid, black magic, cloaks and daggers (ahhh!)
Fuck the planet, until it spins on a broken axis
I'm so bananas I'm showin up to your open casket
To fill it full of explosive gasses
And close it back with a lit match in it
While I sit back and just hope it catches
Blow you to fragments
Laugh, roll you and smoke the ashes
-Hell Bound

Mics get sandblasted
Stab your abdomen with a hand crafted pocketknife and spill your antacid
Sprayed your motherfuckin' crib up when I ran past it
Fuckin' felon, headed to hell in a handbasket
Talkin' shit will get you, your girl and your man blasted
Kidnapped and slapped in a van wrapped in Saran plastic
Get your damn ass kicked, by these fantastic
Furious four motherfuckers
Flashin' in front of your face without the Grand Masters
-No One's Iller Than Me

Got damn, he does so much damage with those 2 verses.
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Re: Best em verse multi-wise?

Postby WakeUpShow » Aug 6th, '11, 20:46

wow after reading arshey's post I'm gonna go with Hell Bound.


Wrap you in rope and plastic
Stab you with broken glass and
have you with open gashes
strapped to a soakin' mattress


holy shit.
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