Julian Marz & Thomas Swanson - "Want Your Soul" feat. Eedee

[Eedee]

Julian Marz raps the chorus and the first two verses, on top of a mesmerizing Thomas Swanson beat and production. I rap the third verse!

Just hit the "play track" in the green box under the details of the song!

http://www.looperman.com/tracks_detail.php?tid=115045

Thanks for listening!




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[BumShiv]

The beat is hot as hell Im really feeling this song The chorus is nice and Julian's verses are nice. I really like the background demon voice that EM sometimes uses and Tyler The Creator uses. Now onto your verse. I personally didnt like you delivery but thats just me. Your flow seemed a little unatural, IDK. Your lyrics were good but it was too short! Overall, I like it

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[Eedee]

The beat is hot as hell Im really feeling this song The chorus is nice and Julian's verses are nice. I really like the background demon voice that EM sometimes uses and Tyler The Creator uses. Now onto your verse. I personally didnt like you delivery but thats just me. Your flow seemed a little unatural, IDK. Your lyrics were good but it was too short! Overall, I like it

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I agree. Thomas Swanson makes incredible beats! And thanks for the nod on the lyrics! But...what would you have me change to improve my flow? It seems that everyone who's reviewed my songs/features says my lyrics are good, but my delivery and flow seem a bit off. I need to work on them. So do you have any suggestions or tips that could help me improve that area? I appreciate the review and the comments, dude.

And I'll review your track ASAP!

Thanks again,
Eedee.

[BumShiv]

i have no idea on how to improve on anything with vocals lol i dont rap or anything. If anything just experiment with different flows and tones and see which one you like most