


TRASH, like that's worse than a current Eminem punchline, please do not ever attempt to rap again.
Spyder wrote:punches - Zul
personals - ehhh Zul
multies - Cream
Flow - Cream
structure - Zul
vocab - NA
Other - NA
7-3 Zul
ZUl alot of your words dont rhyme that well, i know you prob got an accent so thats prob the case but it threw off the flow really bad for me, mroe than Creams structure. which Cream as i said before gotta work on
I'll lash-you-quick and blast-you-with punches that’ll have-you-quit
win me? you cant-do-it cuz like an overused and outstretched ‘pussy’ this ‘cat’-too weak//
cuz am about to wreck one*raekwon* fool if he thinks he’s a lyric-"chef"
no placing money on this cuz crushing CREAM is just like labour with no pain..an easy birth*bet*
Got beaten by IQ*Eye Q* shows you’re a dumb-fella..cuz
Cream had sex with the greek alphabet just because he wanted to fuck-better*beta*
Your rap has more flaws*floors* than skyscrapers and your flow smells like stinking-armpit
So you only drop "bars" when you quit your bad drinking-habit
CREAM a "G.O.A.T"? he must be Kidding…his "joints" wont even fetch him "money"
Cuz the only time CREAM is relevant is when girls apply him on their body
C.R.E.A.M wrote:VenomBlackViper wrote:Punches - CREAM
Personals - CREAM
Multis - CREAM
Flow - CREAM
structure - REAM
Vocab - CREAM
Other - CREAM (for not having that shitty Beta punchline)
10-0 CREAM
Not sure if serious.
Spyder wrote:dude i say everyomes coleon
he admits it mostly when i catch him, didnt hear of eyespick but ill look into it haha
VenomBlackViper wrote:Spyder wrote:dude i say everyomes coleon
he admits it mostly when i catch him, didnt hear of eyespick but ill look into it haha
Shut up Coleon
Am I Doin' It Right?
Cream had sex with the greek alphabet just because he wanted to fuck-better*beta*
But you seem washed up infront of Lucifer, you're in my laundry
VenomBlackViper wrote:You only laughed at that line cuz of how fucking stupid it was though.
And yes, it reminds me of something as well.
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