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Postby RainMan44 » Sep 19th, '11, 23:10

LOF viewtopic.php?f=24&t=126402


Ok, don't know if I'm allowed to do this, or how many people are actually willing to participate. But I wanted to make a thread where you post a line that rhymes with the line the previous member posted. Until we get 16 bars. Once we get there, we do a chorus. Then starts the next verse. You cannot make double posts. Once somebody posts after you, you can post again in the same verse. Please keep count and don't overdo the 16 bars a verse limit.


Again, I don't know if this is allowed, but I wanted to make this thread and figured that the "Creative Writing" section is where it belonged.

PLEASE TRY YOUR BEST TO INCLUDE MULTI'S.













ANYHOW, I'LL START



Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 19th, '11, 23:15

Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Sep 19th, '11, 23:20

Dont stutter bro,she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat

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Postby RainMan44 » Sep 19th, '11, 23:21

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:Dont stutter bro,she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat

:coffee:


When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Postby RainMan44 » Sep 19th, '11, 23:24

BTW, y'all can and should change up the rhyme scheme either every 2 bars or 4...just make sure y'all end the current rhyme on a even number. :y:


So...now you guys can start a new line :whistle:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 19th, '11, 23:27

Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
Dont stutter bro,she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat
When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
But he'll never know, who even bothers to check their pockets?
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Postby RainMan44 » Sep 19th, '11, 23:33

Mr.DGAF wrote:Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
Dont stutter bro, she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat
When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
But he'll never know, who even bothers to check their pockets?

So I'm sure he won't even notice the missin' necklace locket
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Postby WakeUpShow » Sep 20th, '11, 00:19

It's getting hectic, stop it!!! I'll grab the mic and be the next to rock it.
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Postby Atone » Sep 20th, '11, 00:27

get it poppin, do what it takes to get em talkin
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Postby Atone » Sep 20th, '11, 01:02

Geno wrote:Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
Dont stutter bro, she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat
When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
But he'll never know, who even bothers to check their pockets?
So I'm sure he won't even notice the missin' necklace locket
It's getting hectic, stop it! I'll grab the mic and be the next to rock it.
Get it poppin, do what it takes to get em talkin,
I feel like a hellish monster, writin' rhymes to righteousness,


murder the competition writin the tighest shit
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Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 20th, '11, 01:58

Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
Dont stutter bro, she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat
When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
But he'll never know, who even bothers to check their pockets?
So I'm sure he won't even notice the missin' necklace locket
It's getting hectic, stop it! I'll grab the mic and be the next to rock it.
Get it poppin, do what it takes to get em talkin,
I feel like a hellish monster, writin' rhymes to righteousness,
murder the competition writin the tighest shit
Throwing the nicest fit, glowing with ice on the wrist
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Postby RainMan44 » Sep 20th, '11, 05:31

Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
Dont stutter bro, she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat
When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
But he'll never know, who even bothers to check their pockets?
So I'm sure he won't even notice the missin' necklace locket
It's getting hectic, stop it! I'll grab the mic and be the next to rock it.
Get it poppin, do what it takes to get em talkin,
I feel like a hellish monster, writin' rhymes to righteousness,
murder the competition writin the tighest shit
Throwing the nicest fit, glowing with ice on the wrist
Ya life sucks, that's the only reason you be talkin' 'bout "Life Is A Bitch"
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Postby ThomasJ » Sep 20th, '11, 08:58

Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
Dont stutter bro, she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat
When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
But he'll never know, who even bothers to check their pockets?
So I'm sure he won't even notice the missin' necklace locket
It's getting hectic, stop it! I'll grab the mic and be the next to rock it.
Get it poppin, do what it takes to get em talkin,
I feel like a hellish monster, writin' rhymes to righteousness,
murder the competition writin the tighest shit
Throwing the nicest fit, glowing with ice on the wrist
Ya life sucks, that's the only reason you be talkin' 'bout "Life Is A Bitch"
And I was like baby, baby, baby, oh!
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Postby Solace » Sep 20th, '11, 12:38

Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
Dont stutter bro, she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat
When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
But he'll never know, who even bothers to check their pockets?
So I'm sure he won't even notice the missin' necklace locket
It's getting hectic, stop it! I'll grab the mic and be the next to rock it.
Get it poppin, do what it takes to get em talkin,
I feel like a hellish monster, writin' rhymes to righteousness,
murder the competition writin the tighest shit
Throwing the nicest fit, glowing with ice on the wrist
Ya life sucks, that's the only reason you be talkin' 'bout "Life Is A Bitch"
And I was like baby, baby, baby, oh!
Psych, I'll slay you with this lazer spoon
I'll rip the flow; the illest yo, and I hate you goons,
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Postby Sam. » Sep 20th, '11, 12:51

Rubber broke, I busted a nut in your mother's throat
She must've choked, coke coming out all over the flo'
Dont stutter bro, she lusted as fuck as i made your mother bloat
When I was done I hid the used condom in your brother's coat
But he'll never know, who even bothers to check their pockets?
So I'm sure he won't even notice the missin' necklace locket
It's getting hectic, stop it! I'll grab the mic and be the next to rock it.
Get it poppin, do what it takes to get em talkin,
I feel like a hellish monster, writin' rhymes to righteousness,
murder the competition writin the tighest shit
Throwing the nicest fit, glowing with ice on the wrist
Ya life sucks, that's the only reason you be talkin' 'bout "Life Is A Bitch"
And I was like baby, baby, baby, oh!
Psych, I'll slay you with this lazer spoon
Cross the Sahara desert wearing my heavy blazers on ,
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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