Eminememy wrote:Yea, sorry Sam for not feeding ya earlier, I wasn't on for a majority of this week due to school work, nothing personal bro
No problem .

Eminememy wrote:Yea, sorry Sam for not feeding ya earlier, I wasn't on for a majority of this week due to school work, nothing personal bro
Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once
mdemaz wrote:Pretty nice set of bars man, how long did it take you to write?
And what was your influences?
Spyder wrote:was pretty good man, some of the syllables didnt match up so it threw off the flow.
i had to read this slow to get it the first time, but i feel where this was a more dramatic piece it was intended for a slow flow.
needs to be longer imo. i know these lazy asses cant read much so only short things get fed, like dining on the floor.
but anyhow good piece man keep it up, try to match the syllables so there is at least the same number at every line. and rhyming in couplets hold the flow better
Blu wrote:I think Words is my new favorite member.. haha Thanks man!![]()
Blu wrote:I think Words is my new favorite member.. haha Thanks man!![]()
gutawafang wrote:vocab is superb. nice multis here and there. flow could be a lot better. injections doesnt rhyme so well with expressions in my opinion. other than that, good.
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