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Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby mdemaz » Sep 20th, '11, 07:35

Luckily I stepped my lyrical game up now and pulled out that good mic.
Taste of pro for my next album.


Lyrics:

Yeah
you know me man
I'm nuts
yo
uuh!

(Chorus)
I'm psychotic so don't approach me
unless you wanna get your head removed from your throat g 4x

I'm beating your dad (smack smack smack smack smack) making you wee out your ass (pssh)
making you dream about handicap dags teasing you mad (huur)
If I ever get married please make me OD on crack (uurgh)
hitting the first girl to walk past without scheming or being a rat (bitch)
I'll smack people (smack) before they can squeeze out a rap (squeeze pop)
I ain't even doing drugs I inject weed into my nutsack
take 2 cans of anesthetic and make me bleed for a laugh (ahaha)
I'm like a overworked plumber sick of peoples crap (fart)
banging 2 grams of shrooms while snorting three bags (sniff)
hitting this bitch for not starting drama and leave her a hat (here you go)
vomiting up the last 16 meals that I've had (huurgh)
trying to cop a feel from these old woman at the gap (hey
I'm sicker than a dog with aids peeing on a cat (pssh)
me not giving a fuck is like forum rappers leaving feedback (hehehuh)
soo high I can't even see where I'm at (uh)
woke up and I'm a member of some university or tafe (oh shit)


(Chorus) 4x

everyone thinks they are hungry in this rap game but nigga I'm starving
compared to those wack asses I ate them for dinner darlin' (uumm)
I don't like hungry jack's but I like a good frying
I know my success is a certainty like people in my old neighborhood dying (oourgh)
I love how everyone is jumping on the recovery bandwagon
talking about how they turned their lives around bullshit get your pants sagging (babababa)
I've been to the depths of hell met satan had a beer and left
I love putting fear in in eyes of my enemies and causing near mental death
but really you fools haven't seen shit
I've seen people I love die in front of me your opinion don't mean spit
fuck this rap shit I wanna be a chef
what I've seen in the last 5 years is enough to make me wanna hold me breath (huuuuuuuu)
haters why you wanna do me like this
after all the times you said that I sucked at this shit
all you did was make fun of my beatboxing singled me out and made me doubt
now I'm buying houses and eating cans of pringles and eating your girl out (sluurp)

(Chorus) 4x

fuck this rap shit I'm gonna start playing brass and a cello (lalala)
niggas think they are soo swagged out and I'm eating platinum like marshmallows (uugm)
as long as there are stupid people in this world my rap game will never die (uuuh)
but at the end of the day I'm full of emptiness it makes me cry
but fuck this emo shit I see no reason to feel low and trip
ever since I streamed a flow as a kid I've never been soo fit
rapping helps me cope and it helps me get stuff off my chest quick
this is why I know I'm the realist and you halfwits are fresh spit (spit)
this girl i used to love uh
I cant get my dick up her (fuck)
I was too lazy to wear a rubber (fuck it)
smacking this bitch in the hair (smack) for not staring drama
slap my dick (slap) on some whores list
I'm in a living hell surround by conformists (ah)
with iphones pads and windows 7 and shit
get the fuck out spending 5k on that spit

(Chorus) 8x

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Last edited by mdemaz on Sep 25th, '11, 02:20, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby mdemaz » Sep 21st, '11, 10:19

Bump...C'mon guys, this was actually a nice cut for a change, haha.
Still think I should of turned off the fucking preamp..
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Re: Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby Vettori » Sep 21st, '11, 18:26

the beats kind of interesting. I didnt like the voice you used in the Chorus and i dont like the concept so much.

The verses are better. but way to rushed, seems like your just reading through theres no real structure.

Needs alot of work
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Re: Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby mdemaz » Sep 22nd, '11, 04:08

Vettori wrote:the beats kind of interesting. I didnt like the voice you used in the Chorus and i dont like the concept so much.

The verses are better. but way to rushed, seems like your just reading through theres no real structure.

Needs alot of work

Thanks for being honest dude, I've been trying to get real structure into my voice tone lately but it's hard, haha..
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Re: Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '11, 07:21

Dude this was interesting! Reminds me of a semi slim shady... lyrics were rushed at some parts but flowed well at other places
the chorus voice was great the way you growled on the last line. Nice work man! :y:
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Re: Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby mdemaz » Sep 22nd, '11, 07:50

I swag grooved the last verse lmfao..
Thanks man!
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Re: Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 22nd, '11, 14:24

yeah reminds me also of some Infinite/Slim Shady thing..lol
but i agree with more structure needed here...
try to count syllables and match them to each bar..
also i wasnt a big fan of your voice overall...but yeah thats just the way it is...
maybe if you slow down your voice becomes more calme idk..
practise makes perfect :)
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Re: Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 23rd, '11, 15:32

hmm, I was entirely convinced I fed this track.

well, the hook is great and the lyrics are very entertaining, and your mix also got better haha, plus seems like you had fun with it, so good on ya mate. :y:
just work on what I always tell you, structuring, scheming rhymes etc..

funny voice :y: :smoking:
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Re: Mat Demaz- Psychotic

Postby mdemaz » Sep 24th, '11, 09:32

Thanks for the advice and support, it keeps me going really.
I've always had a tendency really to have random multis in different spots on the bars..
I've had a lot of people compare me with young Eminem recently, it's not played-out, it's my natural voice lol..
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