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Re: Manîx [Track One - Infamous Lp]

Postby Sam. » Sep 21st, '11, 14:18

Man1x wrote:bump..

FYI you need to feed other pieces to get back feed .
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Re: Manîx [Track One - Infamous Lp]

Postby Man1x » Sep 21st, '11, 19:13

Sam. wrote:
Man1x wrote:bump..

FYI you need to feed other pieces to get back feed .


I do that on weekends when I have time too, I'm just hoping I get lucky
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Re: Manîx [Track One - Infamous Lp]

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 24th, '11, 07:21

:worship:
"Keeping time on my mind, I realized I was consumed by hate/
My looming fate had me fuming, gazing, zoomed in late."

was my favorite set of bars.

You had great multies all throughout this, good shit on that.


Concept was dope, and you executed it fairly well.

Really good piece, keep pushin' and keep getting' better my dude :y:


I loved this.










Feed mine when you got the time?

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Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: Manîx [Track One - Infamous Lp]

Postby Man1x » Sep 24th, '11, 16:43

Thanks for feed :y:
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