Zabe 2.0 [TRACK 1]

[SG.]

[Intro]

Sometimes when people become unsatisfied...
They must reinvent themselves...
They may act differently...
But they are the same person inside...
And they sing this song...

[Chorus]

Remember me?
I dismember you
You have returned too
And I know the truth
If you think you know me
You think you can slow me
You might as well go
It's Zabe 2.0!

[Verse]
I'm representing experimental hip-hop
You're representing detrimental synth pop
This won't have a beat, why don't you beatbox?
It doesn't matter, it'll still rock your socks off!
I kick your asses, lick your bitches' assets
It's sick how cash is making riches fastest
No investment, no hard work, no Zabian mindset
Hey, Mahmoud, you're hard work, Nutz fucked your mind yet?
Yeah, I need change, a pound'd be nice
Shoot planes in the sky, the clouds are so bright
Like I give a shit about your problems
You're just riffing all that nonsense constant
I'm not a patient man, I'm a human patient
Locked in the asylum until the guards get complacent
See if TorieCheng and Mr. Chow had a baby
It'd be me, ID, Matthews, Zabie

[Chorus]

Remember me?
I dismember you
You have returned too
And I know the truth
If you think you know me
You think you can slow me
You might as well go
It's Zabe 2.0!

[Verse]

Oh shit, another verse, where's my creativity?
It's gone with a cup and 2 girls, you're shittin me
I get in your brain like Lord of the Flies
And swallow you whole like you're in Simon's eyes
Welcome to your education
AKA sex and masturbation
Yeah, you're full of anticipation
50 years later, you've got constipation
You're so repetitive, repetitive, repetitive
Your eyes made so heavy by sedatives
You've got duck hills, in other words, goosebumps
Shit, a Recovery punchline, in other words, a shit one
No disrespect to Em, just take a step back
And realise that compared to Zabe you're just wack
On other songs, I may have been killed
But I'm telling you now, I'm motherfucking ill

[Outro]

Sometimes when people change, they change for the better. Sometimes, they change for the worse. And sometimes when people change, the only things they can turn to are love and war.

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=127043&p=1766361#p1766361

[JamaicanPattlez]

Nice piece ya got there, I liked it. Not a huge fan of the second verse, but overall decent. It was hard for me to pick up the flow, because I usually just add words for a smooth flow, y'know? However, I did like the rhyming and the name drops were entertaining. I give it a 7.5/10, keep it up!


Oh, and feedback please? Thanks man. viewtopic.php?f=24&t=127310

[SG.]

Thanks. I prefer the second verse myself, just because of the punchlines.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Thanks. I prefer the second verse myself, just because of the punchlines.

I'm not really huge on 'em, but I like the Recovery one. Either way man, props to you.

[Mr.DGAF]

Yeah, this is pretty good. The flow is a tad hard to pick up, but I re-read it a couple times and picked it up, so it's good there. The message is good and all, very nice way to open your EP. My favorite parts of this, though, were that there were some pretty clever lines. I really like the Recovery dig.

[Man1x]

Best I've ever seen from you homie
You really put your time into this one.

[SG.]

I'm a motherfucking B.U.M.P

[JamaicanPattlez]

Oh, forgot to add... I really like the hook. Is it supposed to be sung though? Cause I did that.

Oh, feedback me! viewtopic.php?f=24&t=127786

[SG.]

Correct assumption. Although I always thought the hook was the weak point, but I couldn't be bothered to change it.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Correct assumption. Although I always thought the hook was the weak point, but I couldn't be bothered to change it.

Okay. Yeah I'm not too strong with hooks either, I don't really know how to make 'em.

[SG.]

I did what I think was a dope hook for B. Nutz though. Apart from that, most of my hooks are meh.

[RainMan44]

I like the first verse more so than the second, and it seems you stepped up your multi game for this


Hook is decent, it ain't bad.


I also liked the rhymes in the first 2 bars

Keep it up, man.