instead of hover

[Ka0t1c]

feedback link: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=127786&p=1769379#p1769379


Pardon the interruption but i'm startin my introduction
by sparkin up some bud, that's the end of our discussion
then i'ma give anyone a concussion when you hit the blunt
cuz it's an alien abduction from grade A production
the hay's got my blood in my cranium rushin, i'm good, my God
oh well, if it aint the haters now watchin
it looks so odd by the way they are hunchin
while our ladies radiate seduction and they aint even blushin
they're leavin with us and runnin away from their husbands
just because they're disgusted, i'd want to take em on my bus and bust em
til the day's to dusk and we're washed away with the suds all of a sudden
i'm rotten, decayed, tossed in my cave, enslaved to rock bottom
cuz i've forgotten my promise to stay lost to the grave i was brought in
maybe my fate's to remain a hostage boxed up, but i can't behave like a puppet
what's poppin, i'm not talkin bout narcotic toxins, call me crazy, chaotic
i've created a ruckus, a monster amongst us in this dump to taunt us
help me escape with my saucer, doctor up with duct tape if you must sir
these bumps and scrapes i'll custom paint after buffered
back to lunch break, wait til it's supper
let me navigate instead of hover

[Mr.DGAF]

The rhyming on this is seriously awesome. There's a lot going on, rhyme wise, and that's cool. I'm not a hug fan of the concept, but that doesn't mean that I don't give props when the piece is good. It took a while to find a good flow for me, but nothing really bad with that, it usually does anyway. Anyways, man, good stuff. I'll be checking for more drops from ya.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx man, I got plenty on here in cw if you check history, I have some new ones now that I'm gonna post when ready

[Mr.DGAF]

thanx man, I got plenty on here in cw if you check history, I have some new ones now that I'm gonna post when ready

Alright man, I'll check them out when I get a chance?

Mind returning the favor, I'm trying to get a good idea of whether or not my stuff is good or not, and all opinions would be nice. If not, it's cool.

[Ka0t1c]

sure man, no problem