Tell me watchee think & feel free to criticize

PS: no, I don't really think i'm that good

I’m killin’ it, multi-syllabic internal rhymes got you feelin’ it
I steal your wit, fire it back at you, doublin’ time and I still spit
Filthy rich, I transmit, rhymes back to back like full throttle attacks
Drunker than Jack Daniels himself jackin’ his self off in the back!
I’m off of the rack, holy crap i'm dealin' the smack in this track
Take this bottle and shove it, shovel it in your mouth and just yak!
That’s right, I got a couple more of these cadavers
I’m getting’ hungrier than those horny jackrabbits
Lookin’ for their bunny holes, like their tryna’ hide in it
So far in this crap that I’m blind from it, all of this!
All I see is crap in rap and I’m tired of it
So I’m here to set the world straight, I’m inspired from this
When I get done with my fun these fakers will be retiring
(Who’s the best?)
I’ll leave it to you to decide who’s next
Killin’ Emcees who can’t be themselves in the flesh
I’ll snap your bones too, I’ll even pummel your face
Rip out your eye sockets, if that’s what it takes!
(Who’s the best?)
Just let it be for everyone to face the facts
Spillin’ words, jesus, please tell me when it ends
I can’t believe this, people better say their amens
‘Cause I’m not slowing down, for anyone!
(Who’s the best?)
Now before you try to take me back down to your level
Or make me fake the fact that you’re wack and I make you’re face turn yellow
Answer this, who lives in a pineapple under the sea?
Who could financially steal my thunder, buying these rhymes from me?
‘Cause these punch lines are worth more than two million b(w)ucks
That’s double the amount of chickens that you take up your butt!
You slut, mutt, get back to the dog house
Bring it in dog, were do you go? The dog pound!
Fall down, fall back, I don’t even care were you land at
I’m here to scare you and leave, that’s a one night stand scarefest!
All these hard pressed, distressed and depressed analysts
Trying to point out every single syllable rhymed like a drug test
I’m fresh, take this time out of my day to address
All the haters that keep my rhymes were they’re at to stay, all-time best
Don’t push me, you know I’m already free fallin’
I’m a bad boy, here’s my number--go dial it and call it!
(Who’s the best?)
I’ll leave it to you to decide who’s next
Killin’ Emcees who can’t be themselves in the flesh
I’ll snap your bones too, I’ll even pummel your face
Rip out your eye sockets if that’s what it takes!
(Who’s the best?)
Just let it be for everyone to face the facts
Spillin’ words, jesus, please tell me when it ends
I can’t believe this, people better say their amens
‘Cause I’m not slowing down, for anyone!
(Who’s the best?)
Second verse in got you expectin’ chin checkin’
Heck this is easier than contracting vaginal infections
Ejaculatin’ with an erection ontop of an intersection
I jizz on everyone goin’ by if your catchin’ my projection
I’m silent but deadly, yeah I’m so unsuspecting’
I jump out and attack, leave you’re eye jet black wit’ my injection
Showin’ my affection with these fists that I’m connecting
You couldn’t deflect ‘em even if you were a Mexican!
Stone Cold, brick fire, yeah I’m back with a vengeance
Yeah I left you outside but now your catchin’ this flack I’m directin’ n’
I sense you’re nervousness, yeah I think that’s what I’m detecting
I’m feelin’ earnestness, sorry for this merciless threatening
(Syke!)
(Who’s the best?)
I’ll leave it to you to decide who’s next
Killin’ Emcees who can’t be themselves in the flesh
I’ll snap your bones too, I’ll even pummel your face
Rip out your eye sockets if that’s what it takes!
(Who’s the best?)
Just let it be for everyone to face the facts
Spillin’ words, jesus, please tell me when it ends
I can’t believe this, people better say their amens
‘Cause I’m not slowing down, for anyone!
(Who’s the best?)
I do not even care if you don’t like it
(Who’s the best?)
I’m not gonna act like your it when you aren’t
Who’s the best, man, c’mon
Tell me, who’s the best
Who’s the best, you know it
Who is it?
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