Hey bro, let me start off it is definitely a good song for the lane it was intended. Wasn't really my style and isn't something I would of bought, Its more like something I would of enjoyed, bobbing my head to in a club, while ordering a drink at the bar.
I look for something different in hip hop than whats displayed, I like multi's, punchlines, metaphors, humor, etc. Something that turned me off somewhat, was the use of uncommon words..or words that seemed to be placed there to make the line work.
"Matter fact I"m a super kid, karate your ass till you kung fu me, put up boom, boom me"
For example, I didn't really "Get" and...
Or "Why you hatting on me, you snub, come cheer with me young bud"
Sounds like an unnatural way of talking imo. At least where I'm from, maybe its normal where your from, idk.
Anyway,Its hard for me to give criticism because its really a good song for the lane it is...its just not my lane, feel me? Talent is obviously there, you have a good voice for it and good production value. Keep it up, I'll check out some of your other stuff and see if its something I'm more into.
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