Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

[Trimss]

You're about to see peace destroyed, it'll never be restored
When I unleash these beastly hordes on your CD stores
Wanna stop it? You gon' need a priest, at least three swords
A license to ill from the Beastie Boys, three Ouija boards
A squeegee and please be warned, don't ask what the squeegee's for
Or the holy water, acid raps that'll eat these floors
Eat a hole in a rhyme book, you see these horns?
And as for me you ask when I'm gone, will he be mourned
..is puke luke warm, should Casey Anthony do porn?
Can that chick fit a new born dead baby inside a fricking shoebox
With a shoehorn and smother it in chloroform so she can go get her groove on
Can she duct tape and velcro a fetus? Joell, yo, tell Joe I need his
Empty box from his old shell toed Adidas
So I can put these babies in the fetal position, they're getting elbows to the penis
Yeah big deal
I took some little kids big wheel and spit in his frickin big kids meal


I tried there, but I guess I missed some of it. (or a lot.) There are some inverses in pink. What do y'all think?

[Man1x]

CD Stores with be restored, you didn't highlight the C. Also, need a priest and least three arn't rhymes cause they are off by syllable count.

[Innovation]

"tell Joe I need his" goes with velcro a fetus etc.

[Mr Change]

CD Stores with be restored, you didn't highlight the C. Also, need a priest and least three arn't rhymes cause they are off by syllable count.

NEED-A-PRIEST
AT-LEAST-THREE

?

[Man1x]

CD Stores with be restored, you didn't highlight the C. Also, need a priest and least three arn't rhymes cause they are off by syllable count.

NEED-A-PRIEST
AT-LEAST-THREE

?

He only highlighted LEAST - THREE, oh and last time I checked need doesn't rhyme with at

[Sam.]

You're about to see peace destroyed, it'll never be restored
When I unleash these beastly hordes on your CD stores
Wanna stop it? You gon' need a priest, at least three swords
A license to ill from the Beastie Boys, three Ouija boards
A squeegee and please be warned, don't ask what the squeegee's for
Or the holy water, acid raps that'll eat these floors
Eat a hole in a rhyme book, you see these horns?
And as for me you ask when I'm gone, will he be mourned
..is puke luke warm, should Casey Anthony do porn?
Can that chick fit a new born dead baby inside a fricking shoebox
With a shoehorn and smother it in chloroform so she can go get her groove on
Can she duct tape and velcro a fetus? Joell, yo, tell Joe I need his
Empty box from his old shell toed Adidas
So I can put these babies in the fetal position, they're getting elbows to the penis
Yeah big deal
I took some little kids big wheel and spit in his frickin big kids meal


I tried there, but I guess I missed some of it. (or a lot.) There are some inverses in pink. What do y'all think?

But atleast Bold those lines bruh.

[RKOunion]

Can you do Shit On You verses?

[Sam.]

That's relatively how it looks but he's missing a bit. Em gets some 5 and 6 multies in there, during the Yelawolf part - he fuckin kills it. And the part when he mentions Nas.

For the record, I have most of the suggested songs saved on Microsoft Word - don't think I ignore y'all...it just takes SO LONG to do it on the forum cuz when you put a colour code, the message is stretched so much lol...I should just do each album on Microsoft Word and save it, and upload it for people to download.

Put it all in a Box ,then we are done.

[Man1x]

I might have to homie, I started doing the first verse of The Way I Am on here and...ugh, that took like 30 minutes cuz there is SO MUCH. I'll show y'all:


I sit back with this pack of Zig Zags and this bag
Of this weed it gives me the shit needed/needed to be
The most meanest MC on this - on this Earth
And since birth I've been cursed with this curse to just curse
And just blurt this berserkberserk and bizarre shit that works
And it sells and it helps in itself to relieve
All this tension dispensin these sentences
Gettin this* stress that's been eatin me recently off of this chest
And I rest again peacefully (peacefully)...
But at least have the decency in you
To leave me alone, when you freaks seeme out
In the streets when I'm eatin or feedin my daughter
Do not come and speak to me (speak to me)...
I don't know you and no,
I don't owe you a mo-therfuck-in thing
I'm not Mr. N'Sync, I'm not what your friends think
I'm not Mr. Friendly, I can be a prick
If you tempt me my tank is on empty (is on empty)...
No patience is in/in me and if you offend me
I'm liftin you 10 feet (liftin you 10 feet)... in the air
I don't care who is there and who saw me just jaw you
Go call you a lawyer, file you a lawsuit/lawsuit
I'll smile in the courtroom and buy you a wardrobe
I'm tired of arguin' (of arguin')...
I don't mean to be mean but that's all I can be is just me

Props to Inno for pointing out "If you offend me" and "liftin' you 10 feet". I didn't catch it at first.

Holy shit.... when I quoted this is looked at all the color highlights, torture. But there are so many rhymes it is confusing.

[Man1x]

Just do what Sam did, it'd save you loads of work. Oh and which is better lyrically? Marshall Mathers or The Way I Am.

[RKOunion]

I'll try to do the Hellbound verse

Yo.. Slim Shady!
Yo.. I'll fuckin.. I'll..
I'll puke, eat it, and freak you (eww)
Battle? I'm too weeded to speak to
The only key that I see to defeat you
would be for me to remove these two Adidas and beat you
and force feed you 'em both, and on each feet is a cleat shoe
I'll lift you off your feet so fast with a roundhouse
you'll think I pulled the fuckin ground out from underneath you
(Bitch!) I ain't no fuckin G, I'm a cannibal
I ain't tryin to shoot you,
I'm tryin to chop you into pieces and eat you
Wrap you in rope and plastic,/ stab you with broken glass
and have you with open gashes / strapped to a soakin mattress
Coke and acid, black magic, cloaks and daggers (ahhh!)
Fuck the planet, until it spins on a broken axis
I'm so bananas I'm showin up to your open casket
to fill it full of explosive gasses
and close it back with a lit match in it
while I sit back and just hope it catches
Blow you to fragments
Laugh, roll you and smoke the ashes

sit back/ catches - inverse.

[Man1x]

BUMP

[Sam.]

What happened man? How far have you ventured with the "putting in the same box" thing?

[Sam.]

Menzo forgot about this, shame on you.

[WakeUpShow]

I'll try to do the Hellbound verse

Yo.. Slim Shady!
Yo.. I'll fuckin.. I'll..
I'll puke, eat it, and freak you (eww)
Battle? I'm too weeded to speak to
The only key that I see to defeat you
would be for me to remove these two Adidas and beat you
and force feed you 'em both, and on each feet is a cleat shoe
I'll lift you off your feet so fast with a roundhouse
you'll think I pulled the fuckin ground out from underneath you
(Bitch!) I ain't no fuckin G, I'm a cannibal
I ain't tryin to shoot you,
I'm tryin to chop you into pieces and eat you
Wrap you in rope and plastic,/ stab you with broken glass
and have you with open gashes / strapped to a soakin mattress
Coke and acid, black magic, cloaks and daggers (ahhh!)
Fuck the planet, until it spins on a broken axis
I'm so bananas I'm showin up to your open casket
to fill it full of explosive gasses
and close it back with a lit match in it
while I sit back and just hope it catches
Blow you to fragments
Laugh, roll you and smoke the ashes

sit back/ catches - inverse.

God, that verse has to be one of the greatest ever written.