Chaos Theory - Fall Asleep

[Solace]

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This is the single from Chaos Theory's 2nd EP, "Organization XIII".

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[Verse 1: Solace]
When I fall asleep I see patterns on the walls,
While your face is living with the shadows in the halls,
Splattered but it's alright, innocence is draining out,
(It's all in your head) Whispering to play it out,
Isn't it amazing how sad that it gets me,
Occupy myself, I will rap 'til I'm sixety,
Act like I'm risky, actually bitch see,
I'm a shy lunatic who's actually sixteen,
Every dream I hold is far from a goal,
It reminds me of the heart that I've sewed,
The sun goes black, I'm partially broke,
Pretend I'm alright through my art and my soul,
A spark in my core, a middle finger raised high,
Laughing at you assholes since I was in grade nine,
With a great mind...But a brain shut,
I cough and I weeze, I guess it's time to wake up.

[Chorus] x2
Tilt my head back back back and I fall asleep,
Am I awake right now, is it all a dream?
I can hear strange voices calling me...
Try my best but I find it really hard to speak.

[Verse 2: Frost]
When I fall asleep, the demon wakes in me,
Takes his seat, reality is make believe,
Surprisingly, it seems we all hate to bleed,
Friends are the same shit as enemies,
Can't you see, that death will set me free,
Say rest in peace, since life is just a dream,
And the time we wake, will be the time our lives are over,
Every second turns slower, my heart is a rover,
It's searching for some closure, everyday I'd hope and pray,
Before I fall asleep, and the darkness swallows me away,
'Cause this life is below fucking hopeless,
So I toke bowls to be numb from the coldness,
Everything is bogus, a sinister to begin with,
Finishing the witness, diminishing the minutes,
All my evil deeds, will cause the death of me,
So I take a breathe and shut my eyes and force myself to fall asleep.

[Chorus] x2
Tilt my head back back back and I fall asleep,
Am I awake right now, is it all a dream?
I can hear strange voices calling me...
Try my best but I find it really hard to speak.

[Outro]
Tilt my head back...back...I fall asleep...
Fall asleep...Is it all a dream?
Tilt my head back...back...I fall asleep,
I can hear strange voices calling me...

[Sam.]

Great song, but it's too short. An added verse or a bridge in between could have made this a little longer, but that's no big deal, it’s your EP in the end.

Nice choice of best, the deep piano rendition makes it more catchy.

The Intro was nice, but some how I felt that it was a little louder as compared to the verses. IDK but I think that you worked on the Volume of the Intro with a reason. If only it was a few Db lower it would have worked fine for me, don't take this as a negative point, I was surprised actually. ~ You can actually ignore this comment if you want.

Both of you did a splendid job with the delivery of your individual verses, neither one of you tripped off beat. When it comes to flow's, I've to say; Frost managed to grab my attention this time, because last time(If you remember) I had some issues with him, but that's not the case here, he nailed it. He’s really good even when according to you he just started a few months ago. Don't worry I liked your flow too.

What more can I say, loved this song? Keep at it.

[Trimss]

Yo Solace, I liked it. Really

But I liked more the first half of the verse, until the "goaaaal", I feel it wasn't really needed to say it in that way.

The intro and the chorus are great though, and your friend's verse is good too even though it seems like he's still "shy" on the mic (but it's normal, he just started right?)

Overall, great job. can't wait for the ep.

[Tranquil]

Man the lyrics were dope as fuck! Where do you find these beats man, all your beats are insane!

I cant criticize this at all, too me you have past that stage where you don't really need criticism because you have taken what everyone has said and applied it. I loved the first Chaos Theory EP so I'm anticipating this shit.

[Robbie G]

That was dope man, you've definitely improved a lot.

[Solace]

Great song, but it's too short. An added verse or a bridge in between could have made this a little longer, but that's no big deal, it’s your EP in the end.

I did feel it was a great song and adding one of those wouldn't hurt, but we were more than satisfied with the results regardless.

Nice choice of best, the deep piano rendition makes it more catchy.

I love this beat.

The Intro was nice, but some how I felt that it was a little louder as compared to the verses. IDK but I think that you worked on the Volume of the Intro with a reason. If only it was a few Db lower it would have worked fine for me, don't take this as a negative point, I was surprised actually. ~ You can actually ignore this comment if you want.

It possibly is a bit louder, I never paid that much attention to it. I don't think it's drastic enough though, and it seems no one else is noticing it so I'm sure it's okay.

Both of you did a splendid job with the delivery of your individual verses, neither one of you tripped off beat. When it comes to flow's, I've to say; Frost managed to grab my attention this time, because last time(If you remember) I had some issues with him, but that's not the case here, he nailed it. He’s really good even when according to you he just started a few months ago. Don't worry I liked your flow too.

He started mid October. I definitely agree with you about Frost having a better flow, especially at

'Cause this life is below fucking hopeless,
So I toke bowls to be numb from the coldness,
Everything is bogus, a sinister to begin with,
Finishing the witness, diminishing the minutes,

What more can I say, loved this song? Keep at it.

Thank you for listening and feeding Sam.

Yo Solace, I liked it. Really

Dope.

But I liked more the first half of the verse, until the "goaaaal", I feel it wasn't really needed to say it in that way.

I like it's usage, but to each his own.

The intro and the chorus are great though, and your friend's verse is good too even though it seems like he's still "shy" on the mic (but it's normal, he just started right?)

Yeah, he did just start. I'm glad you like the intro, chorus and his verse.

Overall, great job. can't wait for the ep.

The support is always appreciated Trimss, now go out there and drop more tracks.

:worship: Man the lyrics were dope as fuck! Where do you find these beats man, all your beats are insane!

I cant criticize this at all, too me you have past that stage where you don't really need criticism because you have taken what everyone has said and applied it. I loved the first Chaos Theory EP so I'm anticipating this shit.

I don't know I just have a bunch of beats on my harddrive and I search for ones I feel would fit the concept before I write. You think so? Damn, that's a huge compliment. I appreciate it. Good looking out.

That was dope man, you've definitely improved a lot.

Thanks Shady Babie

[B.A.D.]

Album looks great, the covers are awsome

what happened to Mc Anon?

I'm interested, there seems to be this accent that you and your associates have.(you, class, this frost person), like elongated words and stuff like that, sounds unique, but still a bit hard to get into.

anyways, I felt the mixing was done very professional, both of you sound like if you recorded together which is a good thing, and Frost is quite good, and I think it works well cuz you do have extremely similar style/voices.

the songs is good, and has big replay value, after the song finished I had an instant desire to listen to it again. (I did)

I'll be checking that album out

[Spyder]

hey told u id check this shit out

lyrics are good, not your best only thing i didnt like was the chorus.
from a listening point it as alright, i like the mixing which is what im guessing u did
is did tht just to play with the mixing ahha

you guys do have similar styles, im guessing u helped him in writing alot so thats probly why.
your flow, voice and mixing is great as usual.

a couple songs ive heard seem to sound the same so maybe try something different.

woulda liked Angel on this but whatevs

[Solace]

Album looks great, the covers are awsome

Thanks Biggie

what happened to Mc Anon?

On 2 out of 5 of the songs

I'm interested, there seems to be this accent that you and your associates have.(you, class, this frost person), like elongated words and stuff like that, sounds unique, but still a bit hard to get into.

Idk, I don't personally hear the elongation in this one. I know what I'm doing it before, but this felt natural to deliver. It's probably just our influences.

anyways, I felt the mixing was done very professional, both of you sound like if you recorded together which is a good thing, and Frost is quite good, and I think it works well cuz you do have extremely similar style/voices.

We did record together haha. Yeah, we do have similar styles/voices.

the songs is good, and has big replay value, after the song finished I had an instant desire to listen to it again. (I did)

I'll be checking that album out

Thanks bro. I'll get a whole album review for your tape out soon.

lyrics are good, not your best

Well considering you haven't really read my lyrics in years and I don't really think there is much you can critique, it's hard to know what you're saying here. And the times I did post lyrics while you were active in CW as I was, I was a poor writer.

only thing i didnt like was the chorus.

Fair enough

from a listening point it as alright, i like the mixing which is what im guessing u did
is did tht just to play with the mixing ahha

I don't know what you're saying here lol, you're guessing I did is did that just to play? Engrish pl0x.

you guys do have similar styles, im guessing u helped him in writing alot so thats probly why.

I don't help him write, we're just influenced by the same artists.

your flow, voice and mixing is great as usual.

Saying the mixing great is much more clear than whatever you said before, and thank you about the flow/voice compliment.

a couple songs ive heard seem to sound the same so maybe try something different.

If you could elaborate instead of saying "so maybe try something different", I'll assume giving feedback isn't your forte? I honestly don't think you can show me a song of mine that sounds the same as this.

[Spyder]

its all opinion, i can show you ten songs that sound the same IMO

spoke perfect english, not my fault you didnt get it

your lyrics were nice back in the day


i dont think anyone's forte is giving feed
if you dont like what i have to say i wont comment anymore

after all your leaps and bounds ahead of me, what is my opinion to you
Jeesus

[Solace]

its all opinion, i can show you ten songs that sound the same IMO

Obviously it's all opinion, but opinion is based off of something which people can understand. LOL, really come show me 10 songs that sound like an abstract song based on dark dreams of scattered thoughts. Because clearly my songs about an ex-girl, about loving my fanbase, parodying Teach Me How To Dougie, about how I dope I am all sound the same as this and I'm clearly not versatile throughout the amount of tracks I've posted.

spoke perfect english, not my fault you didnt get it

It doesn't make sense. You type like you're on a phone or something and can't be assed to make sense of things. And the thing is, I say I don't understand and you comprehend that I don't understand, but instead of helping me out here and explaining that little part, you said "It's not my fault you don't get it." Like, thank you that totally has purpose.

your lyrics were nice back in the day

This is why I'm saying you aren't good at giving feedback because you say things but you're not really saying anything.

i dont think anyone's forte is giving feed

Big Ax-D, Kez, Block, McMaybe, MC Anonymous and C.R.E.A.M are all members that have given me in depth feed that is actually worth something. It doesn't really help whatever you're doing because it's just another random comment that isn't actually trying to help me out. You actually think I can look at your reply and gain something from it? These members have all helped me throughout the past year in recording because they know my flaws and where I can improve on. Their forte is feedback.

if you dont like what i have to say i wont comment anymore

If you spoke coherently with ways I can improve, maybe I would love what you comment.

after all your leaps and bounds ahead of me, what is my opinion to you
Jeesus

Your opinion is nothing to me. Your feedback is. There is a difference. I appreciate feed no matter if one person thinks I'm better than another.

[mdemaz]

Cool beat my man.

Flow is good, I can't say this enough, even at your age, your voice is really good for rap..

I actually thought it was an Australian accent at first when I heard one of your early tracks from '10, but I was wrong..

Anyway, I guess is relevant to say that I think it's good that you finally put out a full track for a change, it really lets me peer into your style and vocal structure.

Dude, seriously, you have this shit nailed.
I dunno how I can help you improve, but I can help you by continue to keep an eye on you as you progress.

Obviously you might want to tighten the flow a little bit more in some parts when you sorta fall off and then grab the beat with your hand and climb back up.
You ride it pretty well though considering this, so I think the whole situation with you doing that is to sorta form a unique way of delivering.

That is reflected in your voice as it is, but you you walk around and experiment a little bit with your flow, you tend to tread unknown territory and sometimes slip up a little bit.

Still though, you got this shit in the bag though.

Kbye.

[Solace]

Cool beat my man.

Thanks, whoever produced this off of Anno Domini is a beast.

Flow is good, I can't say this enough, even at your age, your voice is really good for rap..

Obviously you might want to tighten the flow a little bit more in some parts when you sorta fall off and then grab the beat with your hand and climb back up.
You ride it pretty well though considering this, so I think the whole situation with you doing that is to sorta form a unique way of delivering.

That is reflected in your voice as it is, but you you walk around and experiment a little bit with your flow, you tend to tread unknown territory and sometimes slip up a little bit.

I definitely ponder how I will sound rapping in a few years when I'm out of this puberty mess lol. I'll try and maintain a more so polished flow in the future tracks. When you say a unique way of delivering, I'll assume it could be when I use full line adlibs and panning that sort of differentiates itself from the rest of the verse.

I actually thought it was an Australian accent at first when I heard one of your early tracks from '10, but I was wrong..

Lol damn. Hm, any idea of what track? I don't believe I posted anything up in 2010, but I could be wrong.

Anyway, I guess is relevant to say that I think it's good that you finally put out a full track for a change, it really lets me peer into your style and vocal structure.

Dude, seriously, you have this shit nailed.
I dunno how I can help you improve, but I can help you by continue to keep an eye on you as you progress.

Still though, you got this shit in the bag though.

Thanks Matty, we'll see how I go along in this. If I tighten up my flow, attain a polished delivery, and get a condenser, I think I'd sound good.

[mdemaz]

Cool beat my man.

Thanks, whoever produced this off of Anno Domini is a beast.

Flow is good, I can't say this enough, even at your age, your voice is really good for rap..

Obviously you might want to tighten the flow a little bit more in some parts when you sorta fall off and then grab the beat with your hand and climb back up.
You ride it pretty well though considering this, so I think the whole situation with you doing that is to sorta form a unique way of delivering.

That is reflected in your voice as it is, but you you walk around and experiment a little bit with your flow, you tend to tread unknown territory and sometimes slip up a little bit.

I definitely ponder how I will sound rapping in a few years when I'm out of this puberty mess lol. I'll try and maintain a more so polished flow in the future tracks. When you say a unique way of delivering, I'll assume it could be when I use full line adlibs and panning that sort of differentiates itself from the rest of the verse.

I actually thought it was an Australian accent at first when I heard one of your early tracks from '10, but I was wrong..

Lol damn. Hm, any idea of what track? I don't believe I posted anything up in 2010, but I could be wrong.

Anyway, I guess is relevant to say that I think it's good that you finally put out a full track for a change, it really lets me peer into your style and vocal structure.

Dude, seriously, you have this shit nailed.
I dunno how I can help you improve, but I can help you by continue to keep an eye on you as you progress.

Still though, you got this shit in the bag though.

Thanks Matty, we'll see how I go along in this. If I tighten up my flow, attain a polished delivery, and get a condenser, I think I'd sound good.

Your voice sorta sounds like how a lot of people from here rap, like....RAHH RAHH voice..
You know?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-58eR_dLDhM
Sorta like that, haha..

Damn, I haven't listened to these guys in ages..

[Solace]

The track you just sent me is dope...Joel Turner. I'll have to look him up.