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Midnight EyeZ - Down & Out (Prod. By Sinima)

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Re: Midnight EyeZ - Down & Out (Prod. By Sinima)

Postby Tranquil » Dec 13th, '11, 13:35

I listened to this more than once just so I could judge properly.

It sounds like you know what your doing, you have the lyrics down, the flow down, the delivery down. The only thing that could be improved is the quality. The song as a whole is pretty good as it is right now, but if you had studio quality on this, shit would be insane. On this mix your ad-libs seem a little too loud, maybe turn them down a bit when you re-record it (if you do). Other than that, song is dope!
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Re: Midnight EyeZ - Down & Out (Prod. By Sinima)

Postby mdemaz » Dec 13th, '11, 13:50

Damn, I like the voice.
It sorta reminds me of a mixture of British and Jamaican or something.

Anyway, I like the overall performance vocal-wise.
I noticed a few slips here and there when the flow would spiral out of control but you maintained it well.
Cool layers and panning, not really much going on in the center...
Maybe you could of added some soft plate reverberation and doubled the center with another layer after the panning doubles.

Anyway, it was a awesome track really.
I can't really argue with everyone else here either, it's brilliant.
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Re: Midnight EyeZ - Down & Out (Prod. By Sinima)

Postby Midnight EyeZ » Dec 13th, '11, 14:36

Cheers everyone, I couldn't explain and you could never know how much I appreciate all the feedback...

Yeah I defo plan to re-record it...I'm actually gonna use a different beat...Nothing wrong with this one, but like I said, I recorded it over 2 years ago and it sounds old to me...I know to everyone else it sounds new but I can't put it out not being 100% happy with it, so I'm gonna use a diff beat, re-record it, improve the mixdown, switch up a few parts and re-release it on the album...

Thanks a lot everyone, you make it seem all the more worth-while!!!...
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Re: Midnight EyeZ - Down & Out (Prod. By Sinima)

Postby Midnight EyeZ » Dec 13th, '11, 17:06

Also guys, if you get a chance feel free to like my page @ http://www.facebook.com/midnight.eyez.music

It'd be greatly appreciated...
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