Tranquil - Cypher Verse

[Tranquil]

Yo. This is a quick verse that I dropped in for a Cypher over at another forum. I just had fun with it and enjoyed recording this! Enjoy

Link:
http://hulkshare.com/8n7d7kcbxds7

Feedback:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=137699&p=1830653#p1830653

[Mr.DGAF]

Woah man, I really liked this. First off, the flow was really nice man. There was maybe a slip up or two, but for the most part, it was really nice. The beat too, it was awesome. You did it justice, props on that. I really liked your delivery too, the way you switched up how you were speaking on it, varying tones and all, was quite nice. All in all, I'm liking this a lot. Granted, I'm new to this particular section, but this was really impressive. No mixing problems at all, and some really nice lines. Nice job sir, nice job.

[Eedee]

The beat is something different that's for sure. Was pretty bad. Your flow was perfect, didn't catch any slip-ups, lyrics were great. Delivery was terrific, you really rode that beat hard, dude.

I actually didn't hear your accent until those little bells started going in my right ear around 1:00 mark, then I was like "shit, the dude has an accent!". I smiled haha. Good shit dude!

Care to feed me back please? Thanks. viewtopic.php?f=38&t=135770

[B.A.D.]

Killer man. your mixing is really strange, I dont know what u keep doing that all the low frequencies are gone, thats weird equalizing and makes the beat overpower your vocals.

your flow is insane man... everything is perfect, but yeah man, if its a competition of sorts and you want a better chance, I suggest u fix the mixdown.

everything else is dope as

[Tranquil]

Woah man, I really liked this. First off, the flow was really nice man. There was maybe a slip up or two, but for the most part, it was really nice. The beat too, it was awesome. You did it justice, props on that. I really liked your delivery too, the way you switched up how you were speaking on it, varying tones and all, was quite nice. All in all, I'm liking this a lot. Granted, I'm new to this particular section, but this was really impressive. No mixing problems at all, and some really nice lines. Nice job sir, nice job.

Thanks so much man, glad that you liked it!

The beat is something different that's for sure. Was pretty bad. Your flow was perfect, didn't catch any slip-ups, lyrics were great. Delivery was terrific, you really rode that beat hard, dude.

I actually didn't hear your accent until those little bells started going in my right ear around 1:00 mark, then I was like "shit, the dude has an accent!". I smiled haha. Good shit dude!

Care to feed me back please? Thanks. viewtopic.php?f=38&t=135770

Thanks man! The beat isnt something that I would normally rap on but I didn't have a choice on the beat so awell, haha! Glad that you liked it man, and I will give it a listen now

Killer man. your mixing is really strange, I dont know what u keep doing that all the low frequencies are gone, thats weird equalizing and makes the beat overpower your vocals.

your flow is insane man... everything is perfect, but yeah man, if its a competition of sorts and you want a better chance, I suggest u fix the mixdown.

everything else is dope as

I really need to get my mixing game up. With this verse I just done a quick little mix but I'll look into some different techniques and see what works best for me!
Thanks for dropping by and giving feed bro!

[mdemaz]

Had a hard time hearing your voice bro, you did all the right things though.
Can't really give you much help because you seem to know what you're doing.

Just keep at it man.

[Tranquil]

Had a hard time hearing your voice bro, you did all the right things though.
Can't really give you much help because you seem to know what you're doing.

Just keep at it man.

Thanks man!

[gutawafang]

Nice guitar beat man. Hahahaha. Your flow is mad good. Loved it.