Trilla Remix - AhdduB

[Ticalrecords]

hey i recorded another song over an ASAP Rocky beat, i couldn't resist. anyway here it is.


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http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/trilla-remix

Yea I know - Call me dead on arrival
Cheat death with what I once said was survival
I be rhyming – grinding in a city near you
Get paid saying all the shit yall wouldn’t dare to
I’m an acid head – who loves sassiness,
Fuck girls who play the pacifist
I’m telling ya - its all an act to her
When she sees me pull up in that acura/
Too hot – got that new watch,
Got the woofs - blasting tupac
How the fuck – can I go wrong,
Look at me – homie I’m so gone,
I’m Living the life of a smart ass,
And I say everything my car can’t
So yeah - I aint a man of many words
I’ll rhyme like a bro when getting girls/
I’m so obvious – its no lie,
I just do whatever them hoes like,
pay me no mind – I’m so dry
With the humor I’m like low tide
thought the streets would cosign
I was panned like a cali gold mine
you thought I was gonna choke right,
Got the flow tight - Its show time!/
So watch the parade I bring on stage,
everyone says that I’ve changed,
but its not because I got paid,
this is the type of stuff I should not say,
cuz I don’t know when gravy train stops
and be ironically something I can’t top,
that’s why the fuck I never take a day off,
and my very fucking life is the trade off/

[l33chie]

Not a big fan of the beat but the lyrics where pretty dope IMO. I think the vocals could have been slightly louder too. Pretty good though man, I liked it.

[Nefarious]

You brought your usual energy and antic's to this which i always like, but at the starting of the beat it didnt seem that great to me, but then i started to like it once you were going faster on it, and then i caught on and was digging even the slower flow through out the rest, it just took me about a second to get used to it, but that tends to happen to me with some certain types of songs, the first listen is always weird, until you get to the 2nd time around, then you can truely enjoy it for how different and unique it was.

[Ticalrecords]

thanks bro i def appreciate the feedback

[Scrubz]

quality its bad. Mixing not great either, it sounds like ur in a tin can haha. But any ways the flow was pretty good, and steady. Lyrics were o-k, just random bull shit but it was decent. Into and outtro were wack. Your delivery was so-so, you have energy but you lack a "comfortable " voice at the moment. IT something you can develop over time. Overall it was a decent track, the rhymes and flow were good for the most part, but the production was down right bad and your delivery was lacking. Keep at it man, you have talent, just need to work on somethings.

[Ticalrecords]

thanks man, much appreciated

[Ticalrecords]

bump...bitch