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Re: Ego - "Egotistical"

Postby Man1x » Feb 14th, '12, 03:31

Geno wrote:Haha I get you man. I dunno, I just thought it was clever. Guess a lot of other people thought it was clever and used it too.

But if you wouldn't mind dropping some feed on the whole thing later on, that'd be nice. Something for us to improve on? To do next? Anything. :y:


Yea, I was going to get around to doing it. I just gotta finish some homework. If I don't feed today it'll be sometime this week.
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Re: Ego - "Egotistical"

Postby Eedee » Feb 14th, '12, 04:52

This is some immense shit. You guys back and forth is reminiscent of Welcome 2 Hell; and if I were you, that's a compliment I'd LOVE to hear. Holy shit. This is just so fucking awesome, I cannot describe. If only you two recorded all of your shit... hot damn!
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Re: Ego - "Egotistical"

Postby Eedee » Feb 14th, '12, 16:55

Geno wrote:Sounds like you like it a lot man haha, thanks! And yeah, a comparison to Welcome To Hell or Fast Lane is perfect for us. We worked pretty hard to make this perfect. Perfecting flows, lyrics, rhyme schemes and especially the back and forth which we love to do. We haven't done it in awhile so we're glad that it was well-received.


I honestly read it w/o the beat first, thought of W2H, clicked on the beat = mind blown haha.

And yes, the "shots fired" that someone pointed out earlier, I think I know exactly who the fuck you're talking about in this :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: Ego - "Egotistical"

Postby Kill You » Feb 14th, '12, 20:50

A lot of dope lines, love the pass a fist at a pacifist line.
"I guess this shit took an unexpected twist like the neck of the fricken Exorcist!"

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Re: Ego - "Egotistical"

Postby Kill You » Feb 15th, '12, 20:49

I actually do like the line, it's not bad...I wasn't being sarcastic or anything. It's a good line.
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Re: Ego - "Egotistical"

Postby EyeQ200 » Mar 10th, '12, 22:43

Menzo your first verse was dope and i really liked it, Geno your second verse seemed well but i couldn't really catch the flow of it (I guess it'd have to be audio - The rest of your stanzas were on point though).
When you guys flipped into the back&forth i was like OH SHIT HERE WE GO! I've always wanted to do a track with somebody on that Red and Meth type heat, and i really loved it, props to both of you this really was sick and worth the read. :b:
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Re: Ego - "Egotistical"

Postby EyeQ200 » Mar 11th, '12, 00:26

No problem at all big homie.
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