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Disaproving Fingertips

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 28th, '12, 03:19

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Hey to all the familiar faces and fuck you to the ones I dont know. Ha naw just felt like checkin up and this section havent been to TR in a minute. See I still got a black name though thats nice. But just a little piece I did in a couple spare moment I had. Hope yall enjoy.\


I dont think I'm really ready to start writing let me crack my knuckles,
Can't shake past my trouble it only comes back in doubles,
I've laughed so subtle but once they strapped the muzzle I lost half the muscle,
Looking past the struggle, on my toes toppling over the wounderous clouded pyramids,
Every syllable carries 100 pounds of tears in it, bruised hands I clear em with,
"Same story" by Vinnie Paz echoes around my empty mind,
My neck could barely support the weight before I straight emptied mine,
Written this same song like 59 or 60 times,
Tired of seeing all these empty lies and wimpy tries through my shifty eyes,
'Take your heart back give me mine' I've said this so many times,
So many lines I've written and erased, written with no place,
My God is given to me with no face so I'm just sittin below space,
My body and my mind grow weaker by the minute,
Through the speakers that I get it to the creature that has sent it,
Man forget it now I'm just tryin to write some foolish shit,
No emotional multies, I'm emotionally lonely, I can't do this shit,
Wait a second who is this? writing my own thoughts of uselessness,
Just the venting I'm sending to empty the mind of a stupid kid,

Like this shit doesnt make me happy or any less agrressive,
Just gives me all my evil thoughts so I can repress them,
The canister that contains my bottled thoughts is about to explode,
Standind on this broken chair with a barbwire noose around my throat,
Look out world I'm bout to go, Heaven or hell I dont know better yet I dont care,
I know either place I get thrown I'm going no where, so I'm thinkin they're both scared,
Wait kid don't go there you dont wanna piss either one of those guys off,
Well I'm past the point of waiting for either one of those guys to die off,
So I figure I'll have to meet them both sooner or later,
Or at least until someone disproves theres a savior,
Pushing my pen so hard that I'm bruising the paper,
Like I'm losing the flavor so some salt in my would would just be doing a favor,
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Disaproving Fingertips

Postby Spyder » Mar 2nd, '12, 19:13

great multies man remind coherent and on topic the whole time,
really painted a picture whilst i was reading this, you dont have much rust man which is cool,

cant wait til you know what happens haha :shifty:
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Re: Disaproving Fingertips

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Mar 3rd, '12, 05:19

Wow Nice verse man, wish I could spit like that!
"Shady said it Shady meant it, I stay demented, Ill throw a stroller at you, with a baby in it"
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