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unrhymed poem

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unrhymed poem

Postby overgrown » Mar 9th, '12, 00:01

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I had a dream I was at the bottom of a deep frozen pond
looking upward at the shadowy footsteps someone on the surface was making
I hear the muffled crunching sounds echoing thru the dark water
Thru the thundering ice fractures I hear a faint calling of my name
Suddenly im up in that persons body only the season has changed
I look down at my feet and there knee deep in sand
Jus then a salmon pokes up and asks me to help him
When I try to answer instead of words only water comes from my mouth
I start to suffocate and the fish swims up stream into my stomach
there he asks where have you been didn’t you hear me calling you
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Re: unrhymed poem

Postby Spyder » Mar 9th, '12, 21:41

same as i said on your other one

get a link of feed, must be a diff LOF than your other track as well
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