Geno - Problems

[Emadyville]

Not much man to say man you did well on the rhymes, best rhymes went in order of verses...storytelling was really good, liked the concept too. that mole line made me laugh and the ending was perfect cause it was literally one word that made the whole thing ("dead" obviously) but cool how all of that came down to just one word and i definitely laughed, great ending man and great piece

[Emadyville]

Thanks a lot man, it always feels better when I hear it from you since I bump your album haha.

youre the third person in the last week ive who has said they're still bumping my album, man it always means a lot to me

[overgrown]

i thought the first verse was rhymed pretty sick with all the inner rhymes. i like the story part of it. for me it was a little hard to follow. she took the pics? how did she print them and tape them to the wall. wasnt it a motel room. idk. it took me a few rereads to figure out it was her phone behind her back. i do like how the verses were cut up. each starting on a new page of thought. not just one giant verse divided. but 3 purposeful sections. kinda like into body conclusion. i thought it was funny. good concept. the round my face made me lol. but why on the floor lol. ouch.

[Mr.DGAF]

It's cool to see you switch it up you know. This one gave sort of a simpler vibe, but at the same time, it shows that it's actually very well written. I don't know if that makes sense or not haha, but it's definitely a good thing. The flow and rhymes are on point, no surprise there. The rhyme patterns were cool, I did like that, it made the story seem really natural and there were a lot of hidden multies in the inside of the bars. The story is nice, executed quite well.

Good piece bruh, now mind returning the feed homie?

[MyLittleAngel]

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[Verse 1]
Hello! The name's Geno and I'm mellow,
Fellows...wanna follow me to get the best flow
Hell no, I got my own problems, like a blond dyke,
Who flaunts like she's hot, right? Opposite of frost bite,
Ominous and cock rides, but yeah that's not the issue,
Always with a tall guy, and then she wanna kiss you?
Imagine what them lips do, gettin' nasty with that bro face,
I bet they've seen places where a motherfuckin' mole ain't!
Ho wait, I didn't mean to go on and offend you,
You know I really wanna take a look what's on your menu,
So can you? Come on.. just lemme have a taste,
We can do just what you like just stay away from 'round my face,
So I get her to the room, grab the broom, jam the door shut,
"Baby what you doin'? That's just rude, man the floor hun,
We're gon' do this my way, remember what you said?
Unless you want the highway, forget about the bed!"

[Chorus]
When you got a problem and you don't know what to do,
You use your head to solve it, should be obvious to you,
You probably wanna screw in this situation right?
But maybe change your mind in the middle of the night,
So next time you get a problem and you don't know what to do,
You use your head to solve it, the one on top of you,
But you probably knew that, always knew that,
So go ahead and be a pimp, while impressin' all the chicks.

[Verse 2]
So I wake up, face the, wall and see my photo,
Oh no, how low, can the fuckin' ho go?
What a low blow...literally,
Well hey I guess that is a good picture of me,
Ugh, snap out of it, she's nappin' by the sounds of it,
Maybe if I hurry I could move it and take down the pics,
So I gouge at them, pickin' tape off with my hands,
There must be like a thousand, shit, scrape at what I can,
She's wakin' up - I can't... escape with both my pants,
And my pride man, it's one or the other, and I tried, damn,
So I stand there with my boxers and some duct tape,
Stuck to my thumbs, "Babe! It's great to see you're up, hey!
Wait, what's that behind your back? Come on lemme see it!"
I'm struggling to find an excuse for what I'm hearing,
"It must be the photos! But you don't need to worry,
I already sent them to my friends and in a hurry!"

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
I bolted on out with her phone in my palm,
She's logged onto Facebook postin' to walls,
This is so fuckin' wrong, now my life's about over,
It was supposed to be private, I don't like the exposure,
So then it gets hectic as a message rolls in,
"Girl, you said it! You're electric with men!"
I guess that she sent, the photos to this chick too,
Weird, her name's Mykal, hah, it sounds like a big dude,
Probably an Italian with a big set of tits (ew),
But that's besides the point, time to give the bitch news,
I walk back in all mad an' 'bout to throw a punch ,
Kick the lampshade in a rampage and blow the bulb,
She starts cryin' all silent as I slam the door shut,
"Baby what you doin'? That's just rude, man the floor hun"
With deja vu I make my move and get up on the bed,
But this time I'll end up takin' pictures of her dead.

[Chorus]

nice

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha damn, I saw the entire thing qouted and figured the feed would be substantial. The "nice" caught me by surprise haha.

[MyLittleAngel]

*nice * is substantial enough...

says it all

[MyLittleAngel]

I feel a little out of my depth in here to be honest...

[MyLittleAngel]

well it is late here and I must go ....sleep time

goodnight

it was a pleasure