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Postby overgrown » Mar 17th, '12, 18:15

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in a nut shell the biggest reason I find to doubt a gods existence
is if we didn’t have one already we would shout for ones assistance

its only natural that we would create a being in which we are truly accountable
sees when none are looking Other wise people could argue survival

of the fittest is a legitimate way for man to live
and big people would just kill and take little peoples shit

The bible gave ppl a place to point and say its says right here you cant do your will
And eventually a place to point and say it says right here to fight and kill

but truthfully I think gods rules are the rules needed to create happiness
kinda in the way Santa Claus provides the structure needed to raise happy kids

one difference between God and Santa is that Santa had to be planed
with a payoff once a year to keep the faith goin as a child would demand

but the parents apparently can be lead indefinitely but the payoff must be grand instead
much different than kiddy toys its great, its perfect ..its...well its a kinda big blank check

it lets your imagination fill it in i mean heaven to you is not written in granite
Im putin in for my own private tropical island, on my own personal mini planet

i can tell you one thing for sure...if there is a hell, it sure aint hot.
i can tell you first hand, hell is cold I live in Alaska where its not

It only makes sense that because the bible took place in such a hot desert location
that ppl would fear the heat more than cold What a coincidental situation

But if you ask your friends would they rather die of heat or of cold
ppl frequently choose heat meaning most ppl have an inherent fear to be froze

religion is about control, pure and simple so are marriages.
the government prefers us in a family cuz of statistical averages

married ppl commit less crime and become more productive citizen
as do practicing christians both lining up for their spoon full of medicine

all you have to do is look down the streets to see how religion has changed today
their on main streets, subdivisions and strip malls not to mention the blatant displays

of their riches in cathedral stain glass palaces shows of their wealth
how can we need more churches than gas stations, grocery stores or motels

$$tax free cash crop$$ once they get you hooked, they expect their due.
Tithing 10 percent of their flocks earnings, that’s tens of thousands of checks accrued

Its like the Matrix…Do you live a lie and be happy
Or deal wit a reality that at times can really be quite crappy

The only logical reasons I can think of to create a world like ours would be too learn from it
Which implies the void of knowledge to fill thus excluding supreme all knowing beings from fit

Maybe we are just for the production of raw materials. wood, gold, oil, gas or something new
or for harvestable body parts, human brains or maybe they just melt us down for glue

so the story goes… we are just a big contest wit Beelzebub.
He says we will corrupt ourselves with free will and willing to back it up

and the J man thinks we will make good choices even though we can choose not to.
Making this a galactic ego driven grudge match between two beings that never met you

The true proof that our creators were not supernatural is held in our own future
plans to spawn life on some distant planet like ours and be an invisible observer

In other words.. .we are not that technically far off from starting our own batch
Gods we would be?? “but it would take soooo long too watch them advance

it would be impossible to follow” does this at all sound familiar
what ever happen to our gods. Gave up, got lost or some still here
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