Solace - Raise The Bar Cypher

[Solace]

I'm not actually apart of the cypher of course, but I've always liked a lot of the entries (especially Dumbfounded's & Arkade's), and I really like the beat so yesterday I wrote a quick 16 lines for it and recorded it.

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[Verse]
When I rap, I attack with murderous simple syllables,
And I in fact start verbally spitting ridicule,
People saying when I rip a track that I'm scary,
Nerd that'll take a track and spit it back in binary,
Make your gut so I see through it the whole time,
And tie you up just to beat you with your own spine,
Don't lie when you're thinking of the best,
Omar is in your mind or I'm ripping up your chest,
Fuck the rest...You're all startin' to lose,
So I'll spit on your mother's face like she's part of the booth,
Decimating any enemy,
I don't even need to rhyme to say that I'm the best to breathe,
Nobody step to me, wrecking the set,
Nevertheless, I'm not a writer, my pen is possessed,
Sever the rest, then I'll stomp you with cleats,
To make your face deform like I want it to be.

[SajN]

It sounded like the mixing was too thick, or something, or very compressed.
Lyrics were cool, I won't say they were really dope, you've obviously had better stuff (Yes, I listen, but I am too lazy leave feedback, sorry )

One short and alright piece.

[Solace]

It's because I had two vocals for the entire verse, I suppose I could've taken one of them down at least -2db more to sound more natural. And that's alright lol, I appreciate getting to know the fact you listen in the first place

Thanks for listening.

[Solace]

Bump.

[Man1x]

I liked it but don't really know enough about producing to give advice.

[Solace]

You're taking over every section on TR I see...Thanks lol.

[Man1x]

You're taking over every section on TR I see...Thanks lol.

Ya, haha. Don't mess this up for me.

[Ticalrecords]

it was cool man, i liked some of the lyrics, i would like to see you spit a few bars in binary since your bragging about it haha. the beat was fire, the mixing cud use some work as someone said earlier, but other than that it was good stuff

[Solace]

i would like to see you spit a few bars in binary since your bragging about it

Lmfao that ACTUALLY wouldn't be hard at all. Using this I would just substitute every value in for the letters in a line http://www.convertbinary.com/alphabet.php and that'd result in me saying like "0101010101000011110101001010101010" over a beat hahaa. Nice calling me out on that though

Thank you AhdduB